Bleeding Sink
An excerpt from Spooky Montana
retold by S.E. Schlosser
I found it extremely annoying that one of the bathrooms on my dorm was permanently closed. Especially since the cause was an urban legend. An urban legend, I tell you! According to the story, years and years ago some bloke got himself massively drunk at a bar in downtown Helena and had passed out in the bathroom on the fourth floor. Apparently, he hit his head on the sink as he fell, and his blood had spattered the sink as he slid senseless to the floor and silently hemorrhaged to death. His death was considered a “sad accident” by faculty, staff and townspeople. But that was no reason to shut up the bathroom for decades! I completely discounted the story of the bleeding sink. That was just an urban legend the students circulated to explain the locked door.
“I’m sick of sharing a bathroom with you disgusting lot,” I grumbled to my roommate. “I’m going to break into the fourth-floor bathroom.”
My roommate’s eyes widened. “Don’t you know that bathroom is haunted?” he exclaimed. “The bloodstains on the sink are as fresh today as they were when the accident happened back in the 1960s, and sometimes you can hear the boy moaning as his life ebbs away on the bathroom floor!”
“Romantic twaddle,” I snapped. “My granny lives in a haunted castle in Scotland with ghost stories that would make your hair stand on end. She’d laugh at me if she found out I ignored a perfectly good bathroom because of a few bloodstains. Besides, the maintenance staff told me the bathroom was shut up pending renovations. No big deal!”
“You’ll be sorry,” my roommate said darkly. I ignored him. He was just sore because I’d lumped him in with the disgusting lot of fellows who mucked up the bathroom on my floor. You’d think someone would teach them to pick up their dirty clothes and clean the sink once in awhile.
When the dorm quieted down for the night – which wasn’t until late – I hurried up to the fourth floor with a bit of wire I’d purchased at a local hardware store. My little brother and I had become expert lock-pickers over the years, since our mother had a bad habit of locking her keys into the house or the car at least once a week. With all that experience, the lock on the bathroom door gave me no problems.
The bathroom was rather old-fashioned in appearance and had a disused air. There was dust in the corners, and a spider web drooped from the ceiling. But I heard no unearthly groaning, no mysterious footsteps. I carefully inspected the sink, the walls and the floor. Other than a smallish orange discoloration on the sink, there was no blood anywhere. Ha! So much for urban legends. There was probably something in the water that caused discoloration over time. I turned a tap experimentally, sure that the maintenance staff had shut off the water long ago. To my surprise, water gushed forth instantly. I smiled. Well, well. It looked like I had a bathroom to myself after all! I carefully locked the door behind me when I left.
I got up late the next morning, and had the downstairs bathroom all to myself. So it wasn’t until evening, when everyone was back in the dorm, crowding in and out of the bathrooms, that I slipped away to use the locked up facilities. It was still early in the evening, and I made sure no one was around before I headed to the abandoned bathroom. With a few twists of the wire, I opened the lock. As I stepped inside, the air temperature plummeted twenty degrees or more and my nose was hit by the pungent, strong smell of fresh blood. A second later, I saw the blood-spattered sink.
Bright-red gore was everywhere – on the porcelain, on the walls, oozing down the sides of the sink. And hovering before it, his feet a good six-inches off the ground, was the luminous form of a college-aged boy wearing old-fashioned clothes in the style of the 1960s. His forehead had a disfiguring dent smashed into it, and blood was dripping down his face. As I gaped at him, horrified and frozen in terror, he turned and looked at me. Then he held out a blood-stained hand. His eyes were desperate, pleading for help, and I heard a low moaning sound coming from between his blood-stained lips. The sound raised every hair on my body and made the skin prickle in sheer, cold horror. I backpedaled fiercely, my legs scrambling to get away while my eyes and head remained fixed on the ghost, on the bloody sink. A drop of red blood fell from his outstretched hand as I stared at him. Then the momentum of my legs carried me through the door, which slammed shut behind me, and the hot, pungent smell of fresh blood followed me through the halls and down the staircases until I was outside into the chilly air of autumn, breathing deeply. My knees shook so bad that I fell onto the nearest patch of grass, stomach heaving. Oh lord! The ghost was real! No wonder they kept the place locked up. I lay on the grass for a long time, ignoring the chill in the air. This was a natural chill which comforted, not that unnatural chill that had frightened me upstairs. I breathed in and out, in and out, watching the stars above me, bright even through the campus lights. I took comfort from the huge, clear expanse of sky. But I still felt reluctant to go back inside that haunted building. I shuddered once, from head to toe. Oh how my granny would laugh if she knew her big brave grandson was too scared to go back inside a haunted dormitory. It was the thought of granny that got me back onto my feet and upstairs to my room. But I didn’t care what granny or anyone else thought of me. I was never going back to the fourth floor bathroom. Once was enough.
You can read more ghost stories in Spooky Montana by S.E. Schlosser.
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Comments
love the story ms sandy
Posted by: coley | August 31, 2009 08:44 PM
OMG SCARY!!!
Posted by: samantha | October 1, 2009 06:00 PM
Excellent site. It was pleasant to me.,
Posted by: Nydirasa | October 13, 2009 10:18 AM
YOU CALL THAT PLEASANT?!?
Posted by: Cloe | October 14, 2009 05:43 PM
boring
Posted by: kim | October 15, 2009 09:37 AM
that sounds scary but realy cool
Posted by: lauren | October 19, 2009 02:50 AM
omgggggggg that was weird omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg lol so scary this kid wet his pants teeheee
Posted by: carlos | October 19, 2009 08:35 AM
not scary:)
Posted by: Anonymous | October 19, 2009 09:29 AM
really really really really really really stupid
Posted by: dylan | October 19, 2009 07:20 PM
that is so scary im going to dream .
Posted by: rodrigo | October 20, 2009 09:56 AM
cool
Posted by: hi | October 21, 2009 12:51 PM
this story is kewl! i think its kinda cheezy- but good discription....=).. no verry scary.
Posted by: Lexus | October 21, 2009 07:52 PM
this is so funny lol..............it scared a lot of my friends
Posted by: amanda mowery | October 23, 2009 08:44 AM
wow daz wierd
Posted by: bailey | October 23, 2009 02:47 PM
love da story
Posted by: deshannon | October 23, 2009 05:58 PM
That wasn't as bad as I though it could be.
Posted by: Kendra | October 23, 2009 08:29 PM
oh my gosh thats so scary!
:o
Posted by: sarah | October 24, 2009 01:34 PM
WOW
Posted by: NICOLE | October 27, 2009 10:49 AM
that was like the coolest thing ever i wish i was there
Posted by: jordan | October 28, 2009 02:34 PM
I thought it was good but i thought it could have a way better ending like the man followed him that night and in the morning he was lying dead on the floor
Posted by: Taylor | October 28, 2009 06:28 PM
It was pretty good...i guess but again i need more excitement!!!!!!
Posted by: Annie | October 28, 2009 06:46 PM
this sukedddd
Posted by: ghfjhgkl | October 29, 2009 08:18 AM
You fearful stupid girls irritate me so much
Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2009 01:02 PM
not very scary but a good story
Posted by: sAmAnThA | October 29, 2009 08:20 PM
seriously you call that scarey.
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 10:24 AM
yeah it was good but not scary enough
Posted by: brittany | October 30, 2009 11:42 AM
This story is so not scary you little girls who think this is scary are sissys me and my 8 year old sis read this and thought it was the least scariest story EVER!!!
Posted by: Brynn | October 30, 2009 02:44 PM
omg its supre scary
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 03:02 PM
i woulda helped him! even if he was a ghost!
Posted by: boogle | October 30, 2009 04:45 PM
I HATEDDD THIS STORY!!!!
Posted by: bob | October 30, 2009 04:53 PM
NOT SCARY AT ALL!
Posted by: ghckjhv;lv | October 30, 2009 05:12 PM
not that scary but interesting!i liked it:)
Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 09:21 PM
Eh, it was a good theme, but you could have had a lot more description of the ghost, also a chase scene would have been cool
Posted by: Scorchfire | October 30, 2009 10:57 PM
awesome
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 04:36 PM
The story wasn't very scary
Posted by: Anonymous | November 1, 2009 09:40 AM
id hate to be in dat guyz shoes!
Posted by: sumone hoo likes commenting stuff | November 1, 2009 12:28 PM
the story was kinda cool...
not very scary..but i still liked it:)
Posted by: Onica | November 8, 2009 08:08 PM
it not scary at all
Posted by: Anonymous | December 19, 2009 05:46 PM
OMG that is a cool story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: beth | January 4, 2010 04:58 PM
love it!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 6, 2010 01:52 PM
awasome
Posted by: Anonymous | January 8, 2010 05:06 PM
omg
Posted by: yu | January 10, 2010 07:17 PM
that was not scary at all... that story totally sucked!!!
Posted by: anonymous | January 13, 2010 10:15 AM
omg
Posted by: quaya | January 13, 2010 11:08 AM
Omg I was at the part where he sees the blood and the ghost when my dog jumped on the bed!
Posted by: Starr | January 18, 2010 08:09 PM
COOL I LOVE THE STORY.
Posted by: Anonymous | January 19, 2010 08:11 AM
LOVE IT?! ARE U NUT U BOZO? IT WAS A CRAP STORY
Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 02:31 AM
So not scary just a little creepy
Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 06:08 PM
i have read better stories then that but it was ok :D
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:05 PM
i told it to my friends man did they get scared
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:06 PM
It was great! Just not the 1#
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:07 PM
Id hate to be him imana tell kirby (>^_^)>
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:08 PM
i i i just Well dunno what tp say it was a liitle weird i agree with the guy that said OMG that was cool!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:11 PM
CREEPY CREEPY CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | January 23, 2010 02:14 PM
Wow it wasn't dat creeeepy but yea it was a right good job ms.sandy
Posted by: alexis | January 26, 2010 02:24 PM
that was retarded sorry but it takes a lot more to scare me.
Posted by: Anonymous | January 29, 2010 02:35 PM
Now that was pretty scary, but that kid thinks too much of his granny. But a least it was better than the Axe Man story
Posted by: Bobby | February 7, 2010 11:46 AM
that was stupid!! that was a horrible story!
Posted by: Morgan | February 8, 2010 02:12 PM
OMG! IF I SAW DAT ID CRAP MYSELF! but awesome job on da story! <3
Posted by: wendy | February 11, 2010 07:38 PM
I got two ghosts in my house and i heart them to death well one of them anyway thar names r timmy (a little boy) and frank (the man who killed timmy) anyways i love them to death! i <3 mi ghosts
p.s. im sereously sereous im not liein i really do have two ghosts in my house.
Posted by: wendy | February 11, 2010 07:45 PM
HOLY CRAP
Posted by: Anonymous | February 15, 2010 09:56 AM
this is scary
Posted by: Anonymous | February 16, 2010 03:47 PM
WOW!THAT SCARED THE CRAP OUTA ME!
Posted by: sali | February 21, 2010 01:52 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I AM DEAD AAND MY GHOST IS POSTING THIS STUFF! OH YEAH THIS ONE TIME OH CRAP WHO CARES IF MY LETTERS ARE ALL ON SHIFT!
Posted by: sali | February 21, 2010 01:54 PM
this is a good stories for big peoplr to raed
Posted by: maira | February 28, 2010 10:12 PM
im 10 year -old and im not scared lol
Posted by: Anonymous | March 5, 2010 06:32 PM
wow, thats pretty scary
Posted by: Anonymous | March 8, 2010 02:14 PM
It was ok
Posted by: ash | March 12, 2010 04:06 PM
Omg that was weird but okay.
Posted by: Cookie | March 16, 2010 09:20 AM
lol i hate scary movies cause you can see that they are in the real world but i love scary stories!! short vids are fine, but not the acctual movies. i live in Fairfield, Houston, and there is this haunted house. it is real. my friend's friend went there with her whole family and half came out. the place has been sued so many times, but they never close it. i wanna go!! this was a good story!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 20, 2010 02:01 PM
i liked it.......... watever
Posted by: sugamama | March 23, 2010 11:45 AM
if that was me, i would freakin jizz my pants!
Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 10:13 PM
this is not scary
Posted by: vale | March 28, 2010 11:54 AM
stupied
Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 05:38 PM
someone get the ghost advecer team over there
Posted by: Anonymous | April 1, 2010 06:18 PM
so crappy
Posted by: michael | April 2, 2010 10:40 AM
that was the best story ive ever heard!!!!! :0
Posted by: ANNOYING | April 16, 2010 02:58 PM
Haha, the only thing that makes it scary, is if you put yourself into his shoes!
Posted by: Anonymous | April 17, 2010 05:31 PM
I'm afraid to go to college now! But it wasn't really that scary if you think about it.
Posted by: megan | April 26, 2010 03:36 PM
average.
Posted by: vamp123 | April 29, 2010 04:11 PM
i think it's so scary cause i read it nicely
Posted by: swift | May 2, 2010 01:47 AM
OMG! At first I totally thought the main person was a girl. When they said big grandson, I broke into a fit of laughter along with my friends. LOL! Kwel story though super awesome.
Posted by: Olivialee | May 4, 2010 07:48 PM
that wasnt very scary. i could tell it wasnt real :(
Posted by: awesome | May 10, 2010 12:16 PM
i liked it
Posted by: kyle | May 12, 2010 10:07 AM
Plzx dont tell me thts true an if it iz were iz it
Posted by: jodi | May 15, 2010 01:48 PM
*BORING* !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | May 15, 2010 04:45 PM
rrr it was ok lol =)
Posted by: eLiShA | May 17, 2010 01:01 AM
not scary at all
Posted by: cool | May 20, 2010 05:54 PM
creepy
Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 02:22 AM
This story is not that scary i have watched a cartoon more scarier than this
Posted by: KENZI<3 TANNER | May 21, 2010 09:05 AM
THIS IS A OK STORIE I THINK IT COULD BE A LITTLE MORE... KEEP AT THE EDGE OF YOUR SEAT. MAYBE? LOL:)
Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 12:29 PM
to be honest guys once you think about it how can a ghost have "FRESH" blood dripping from him when hes been dead for 40-45 years i mean come on think about it!!
Posted by: shannon | May 23, 2010 10:27 AM
i thought it wasa ok story
Posted by: samantha | May 23, 2010 12:16 PM
SOOOOO NOT SCARY THAT WAS GAY AND LAME!!!!
Posted by: ANABELL farrow | May 28, 2010 01:20 PM
OMG!SO SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: TheRealBloodyMary | May 30, 2010 11:09 AM
ehhh not that scary BOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: camryn | May 30, 2010 11:27 AM
it was okay but it was not as good as BlODY MARY
Posted by: alex | May 30, 2010 11:33 AM
I THINK IT WAS SO SCARY BUT I THINK I LIKED THE SCARY STORY "THE COCK LANE KILLING" OR "BLOODY MARY" BY THE WAY I ACTUALLY SAW HER
Posted by: SARAH | May 30, 2010 11:35 AM
That is stupid
Posted by: manya | May 31, 2010 05:24 AM
omg weird ive been in much more situations one time i was sitting there sleeping and the sink turned on so then i turn it off then a deep darn voice said turn it back on so i did noot i have to hear drip drip at night
Posted by: spooky girl | May 31, 2010 10:40 AM
umm ok??
Posted by: j/k | June 1, 2010 10:04 AM
i think it was very scary and i mean very scarry
Posted by: Anonymous | June 3, 2010 07:10 AM
omg that was wierd but also scary thanx for giving me some thing to do psshht that was sooo coooool
Posted by: Anonymous | June 3, 2010 09:34 PM
that was kinda creepy
Posted by: me | June 4, 2010 12:49 PM
May not seem too creepy, however there really is a locked bathroom on 4th floor St. Charles hall at Carroll College in Helena for that reason. That really is the reason why (someone died) and freaky, freaky stuff really does happen there!
Posted by: bonny | June 6, 2010 12:18 AM
not really scary but cool x x x+
Posted by: Anonymous | June 7, 2010 11:32 AM
omgoodness this is lyk really scary i luvv them
Posted by: allie | June 7, 2010 12:52 PM
this was not a scary story i almost fell asleep!
Posted by: kelsey | June 7, 2010 03:37 PM
boring
Posted by: jessica | June 11, 2010 09:41 AM
Great story cool description
Posted by: Anonymous | June 12, 2010 11:22 AM
GOOD STORY! Different ending though.
Posted by: Kamryn | June 13, 2010 05:31 PM
I like the part that says "I'm sick of sharing a bathroom with u disgusting lot"LOL
Posted by: Anonymous | June 14, 2010 02:29 AM
Wow. that was the dumbest story ever. It wasn't even scary. You need to get scarier stories.
Posted by: Kyle | June 14, 2010 08:45 AM
Oh wow that is sooooo scary. Geez. But it was'nt as scary as wetting my pants. Man, that would be scary...
Posted by: divajelly | June 14, 2010 09:10 AM
Man this story gave me chills.
great jobb :)
Posted by: Bella | June 15, 2010 02:19 PM
it was some what scary but it was boring to
Posted by: Anonymous | June 24, 2010 10:04 AM
This is 2 scary!
Posted by: Anonymous | June 25, 2010 05:03 PM
ooooooo cool and scary i read it all to my older and littler cousins
Posted by: dfkjghipzdufacn | July 1, 2010 11:53 AM
I think I wet myself :/
Posted by: Cyra | July 2, 2010 05:30 PM
i know so scary!!!!
Posted by: Anonymous | July 6, 2010 07:34 PM
interesting
Posted by: maria | July 9, 2010 05:18 AM
It would of been scarier if the dude died. :)
Posted by: Selena | July 11, 2010 12:20 AM
boring, i mean really, really boaring!! (=.=)
Posted by: Anonymous | July 13, 2010 08:52 AM
wow not scary :P
Posted by: Anonymous | July 14, 2010 08:43 PM
I'm actually reading a lot of these stories just now, because I'm studying the ways in which they are written. For me, this story pretty much sum's it up. 5*
Posted by: Andrew-David | July 26, 2010 10:13 PM
Wow!! It was a really good storie, Good job, you should do more...
Posted by: Mittzy | July 27, 2010 10:24 PM
OMG TOTALLY SCARY!!! I WOULD TOTALLY FREAK IF I SAY THAT!!!
Posted by: Krissy | July 28, 2010 12:10 PM
that boy was bloody and i wet my self this relly relly relly scard me
Posted by: rick | July 28, 2010 02:31 PM
i have a couple ghosts in my house too! i don't no how many but my backyard used to be a civil war graveyard and my puppy will stand up and bark at the wall and then she'll look really scared and then she'll shiver
anyway my friends and i use a ouji board and the little plastic circle completeley flipped after we were all touching it...it was really scary!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. i have a guardian ghost named maria
Posted by: Alley | July 28, 2010 05:16 PM
i LOVE horror!
Posted by: anonymous | July 29, 2010 01:49 PM
wanna try it myself hahaha to see how the ghost looks like ..creepy yet exciting to experience
Posted by: chim | August 7, 2010 05:30 AM
nice!
Posted by: Anonymous | August 17, 2010 07:59 AM
nice,,,story....builds some suspense
Posted by: desi | August 23, 2010 03:57 PM
that sure was a scary story
Posted by: gtrtrhtr | August 27, 2010 03:01 AM
i lu-ved all the gory parts
this is awesome
too bad there wasnt a you know what scene
Posted by: Kaitlynn | September 6, 2010 03:38 PM
that was so not scary ive heard worse
Posted by: Bri Bri | September 7, 2010 03:58 PM
I m ten and dat wasnt scary at all. Thats prob because i watch scary movies alot. It needed a chase scene
Posted by: Anonymous | September 8, 2010 03:43 PM
omg i felt a shiva down meh spine and i felt like looking behind me so bad i have to print this out and show my mates HAVE 2.
Posted by: becca | September 10, 2010 01:05 PM
haha, that made me laugh. <3
It was amusing. Nice story love! :D
Posted by: kellie | September 11, 2010 11:09 PM
wow i would immediately call my mom and ask to go home if i were him
Posted by: abi | September 12, 2010 07:33 PM
Wow that story gave me the shivers I was definitely looking over my shoulders afterward.
Posted by: ivy | September 13, 2010 08:01 PM
if this bathroom is real then i want to see it
Posted by: luna | September 16, 2010 08:35 PM
wow i don't get this story
Posted by: basilia | September 18, 2010 01:35 PM
This is now my favorite ghost story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Hannah | September 19, 2010 09:11 AM
This is a dull story But its still exciting :)
Posted by: donnia | September 23, 2010 12:05 AM
cool story dude. u sooo brave.
Posted by: Dash | September 26, 2010 03:05 AM
OMG.......I LOVE IT I TELL U@
Posted by: Anonymous | September 28, 2010 04:44 PM
I loved the story but when i got done i had o go to the bathroom and it was so dark i was freaking out!
Posted by: Anonymous | September 28, 2010 07:26 PM
wow! i gots the shivers! i loves it! i love ghost stories, and this is my new fave!
Posted by: Rose2014 | September 30, 2010 10:37 AM
Wowwww ! Creepy . . .
Posted by: NeCole | October 1, 2010 09:27 AM
not bad
Posted by: Anonymous | October 2, 2010 10:57 AM
sweet
Posted by: Anonymous | October 2, 2010 11:41 AM
In case the story is true, that ghost (and all others of the similar sort) should not be locked away. All they need is help which is hard to come when they are locked away. Locking a ghost away might prevent people from meeting it but the ghost is still there and in most cases they are not the least hostile, they are only confused or sad, all in all in need of help to pass over or to solve some things they left on Earth. There are hostile, dangerous spirits but this one is almost certainly a confused one in need of help.
Posted by: Herne the Hunter | October 8, 2010 01:36 PM
Cute :)
Posted by: JuJu | October 10, 2010 01:11 PM
haha loved it!!!!!
for some reson i keep thinking bout zobieland....BEST MOVIE EVER!!!!!!!!! :)
Posted by: victoria | October 11, 2010 09:21 AM
that was really weird lol i am too skeerd to go to the bathroom by my sekf lol
Posted by: Destiny | October 12, 2010 02:16 PM
pretty cool man !!!
Posted by: luke | October 13, 2010 05:30 PM
that was so scarry!
Posted by: vesper | October 13, 2010 07:50 PM
Theres this little gurl in our house has clothes on that are from old old times and shes been seen bye me my stepdad and my mom and shethroughs rocks at the walls and you can see her silloete walking in the hall friends that have slept over hav always seen her and she wants her mommy!!!!!!
Posted by: desiree | October 17, 2010 05:10 PM
that was such a freaking scary story i almost pooed my pants because the telly turned on and it was blaring =( =)
Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 11:58 AM
i thought it was funny how u could b so stupid 2 go in there alone and totally be a butt and not belive it
Posted by: Maya | October 23, 2010 02:27 PM
you guys think its funny because you've never delt with supernatural activity before. its real. trust me, i can see ghosts. I've delt with so many stories like this and you guys thinks its just fake. So next time you judge stories like this, picture being there. its scarier than any of you can imagine
Posted by: Lulu | October 23, 2010 02:54 PM
woa! i'm never going 2 the bathroom again!
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!:.0>-<
Posted by: Kira Schroeder | October 23, 2010 09:09 PM
that wasent that scairy, gosh guys!!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 12:27 PM
i like the story...
Posted by: brendi | October 26, 2010 10:41 AM
ummmmmm.......wow
Posted by: blash blah | October 26, 2010 03:32 PM
Giv this one 3 and a half stars
Posted by: jiwanna | October 29, 2010 03:30 PM
nice
Posted by: bcba | October 30, 2010 03:02 PM
these stories dont scare me. just freak me out a bit...
Posted by: justine | October 31, 2010 02:37 AM
very weird but not scary
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2010 07:57 AM
crazy
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2010 02:36 PM
aw poor dead drunk boy just probably wanted the narrator to be his freenndd! ^.^
Posted by: Holly | November 4, 2010 07:37 PM
OI THAT KID SHOULDA HELPED HIM!!! GAH! scardey cat! honestly! get a medium in or something and help send that poor boy on his way! I feel so sorry for him!
Posted by: Mew~Suika | November 5, 2010 11:13 PM
weird scary.
Posted by: spooks at dawn | November 17, 2010 03:21 PM
it was scary !
i love it !
Posted by: Rashida Ahmad | November 25, 2010 03:51 AM
it was kinda scary and kinda not!?
Posted by: Tia | December 5, 2010 12:52 AM
scary!!!
Posted by: eeya | December 7, 2010 01:59 AM
Crazy! Good story. Kept my sis quiet! lol
Posted by: Remycase | December 17, 2010 11:23 AM
Yeah, that was scary :/
Posted by: Molly | December 24, 2010 08:34 AM
If I was there I would have befriended the ghost :D
Good story not scary
Posted by: Emily | December 26, 2010 07:48 AM
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I am now afraid to go to college!
Posted by: Spunky | December 26, 2010 04:27 PM
Little scary because I read it at night
Posted by: cassandra | December 27, 2010 08:07 PM
that was soooooooooo nasty
Posted by: leanna | January 3, 2011 03:09 PM
i thought is was scary
Posted by: leanna | January 3, 2011 03:11 PM
nice story
Posted by: Anonymous | January 4, 2011 08:23 PM
That was dead cool! but Im not going too my bathroom now thanks!!xxx
Posted by: Lozzz | January 9, 2011 07:37 PM
If you find that boring your crazy i was scared to go into my bathroom and ive lived in this apartment for almost twenty years!
Posted by: Ryan | January 9, 2011 07:48 PM
really cool, the death of the 1 college boy could have been more grusome, but this story was ok.
Posted by: Cheyenne | January 11, 2011 02:31 PM
ooooo a bathroom im so scared [not] it was ok not my fav though a video would hav been cooler
Posted by: vw | January 15, 2011 05:59 PM
everyone that says this is stupid, dont be jealous cause you cant tell good stories like these ones! i thought it was a bit nasty (sounds shocking from a man who plays zombie games that shoots and cuts there heads off huh?) but at the same time pretty cool
Posted by: ricky | January 24, 2011 05:54 PM
yes its a ghost but its not like its going to do anything but die over and over again
Posted by: Lala | January 24, 2011 06:15 PM
cool
Posted by: Caitlin | January 25, 2011 09:35 AM
Hmmmm.... right.
Posted by: Anonymous | January 26, 2011 02:10 PM
WWWOOOWWW
thats wat i call a campfire
story my friends are going to freakkk
Posted by: me | January 29, 2011 11:31 AM
I love this stroy
Posted by: dasgdfgh | January 31, 2011 02:20 PM
Eh. it was alrightt
Posted by: Lindsey | February 6, 2011 03:23 PM
wierd
Posted by: person | February 7, 2011 08:51 AM
it was ok.. iwasnt dat scared bt it kinda got to me ..
Posted by: pebbles | February 7, 2011 10:09 PM
Wow that was very nice,i wish something like that would happen to me.
Posted by: Mary | February 17, 2011 01:58 AM
wow not that scary at all but good
Posted by: Anonymous | February 24, 2011 05:15 PM
scary and spooky
Posted by: waf | February 28, 2011 09:32 AM
i thought it was okay i wasnt like on the edge of my seat i thought it was a good story though. i think it needed more detail like what was this kids name what did he look like how old was he? these are questions i found myself asking as i read the story but i thought it was a good story none the less
Posted by: mandalyn | March 2, 2011 03:04 PM
coolest story ever
Posted by: jocelyn | March 2, 2011 08:52 PM
That....was.......EPIC!!!!!
Posted by: Abdallah | March 4, 2011 11:41 PM
Awesome story guys
Posted by: thomas | March 8, 2011 12:01 PM
thst was a pretty good story
Posted by: george | March 17, 2011 10:14 PM
holy cow that was scary
Posted by: Anonymous | June 4, 2011 02:36 PM
this story is awesome! :)
Posted by: haters<3 | June 12, 2011 12:37 PM
PRETTY COOL?
Posted by: brittany | June 20, 2011 11:32 PM
it was an ok story.......i guess
Posted by: nelliesixx | June 21, 2011 08:37 PM
kinda weird and creepy but awesome I love it <3
Posted by: Julia | July 14, 2011 12:17 PM
that would scary my big sis
Posted by: tianna | July 20, 2011 03:17 PM
WoW....Give me a nightmare when enter MY bathroom!!
Posted by: AwwThay | July 21, 2011 01:13 PM
not to scary kind of funny actually
Posted by: Hayley | July 25, 2011 10:19 AM
IT IS FUNNY
Posted by: Anonymous | July 26, 2011 09:22 PM
Ok yes that was obiviously a litte more creepy but lt was cool:)
Posted by: Anonymous | July 28, 2011 06:28 PM
This story was AWESOME !!!!
Posted by: Joe | August 3, 2011 03:21 AM
ok if i read 1 more comment about how the stories boring or stuipid or bumbim going 2 freek out not all ghost/ghost stories r scarey thought it was very good i know wouldnt put stuff on the internet for people 2 say it sucked would u think about that
Posted by: Anonymous | August 3, 2011 01:39 PM
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO scary, now me and my bff r scared to go to sleep!!!!!! Goin 2 have nitemares!!
Posted by: Sabrina G | August 4, 2011 05:20 PM
gave me chillls!
Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2011 10:35 AM