Axe Murder Hollow: From Ghost Stories at Americanfolklore.net

that was f***in scary. wat were u thikin? is it true?that was b****in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPY TIIIIIIIIIIME.............................agreed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: ladyman | October 30, 2009 11:29 AM

L.A.M.E

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 12:36 PM

this story was so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 03:09 PM

That Story is so scary it's way better than all the other crap i'v read.And i think that it gets five stars *****

Posted by: Claudia | October 30, 2009 03:30 PM

is that real?

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 03:52 PM

that was the scariest story ever u must right another 1

Posted by: matt | October 30, 2009 03:52 PM

that was not scary it isint real

Posted by: jamee lloll | October 30, 2009 04:14 PM

ok that was really disturbing....i have a sleepover tonight, i might just tell that one to make every one wet themselves! haha

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2009 04:27 PM

OMG OMG that was a cool story i read it on halloween last year and i was scared sh**t i did't sleep all night i just kept seeing the axe man so i lit the pumpkin and hoped that i would forget about it but then i just saw susan and the axe man in the flame in the end i whent to my mum and dads room and slept for a hour before i had to wake up!that was a weird halloween last year but this year i am not reading it agin.(the story is soooo scary)

Posted by: Sara | October 30, 2009 04:43 PM

that was not scary at all it was good and long! i thought it wud b scaryer but awell ...........................................

Posted by: fiona | October 30, 2009 04:59 PM

WOW...NOT SCARY!!!

Posted by: parawhore | October 30, 2009 05:46 PM

i give that 5 stars ********** ok mayb 10 stars cuz it was awesome

Posted by: kylie | October 30, 2009 06:31 PM

omg!that scared the f***k outta me!

Posted by: jane doe | October 30, 2009 09:08 PM

hate it so boring! it's like reading a story in school!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:32 AM

love it! man i can still hear my heart plusing!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:35 AM

those that say its boring must have no life cause it was better than some of the axe storys!

Posted by: anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:46 AM

OMFG!!! That scaryed the S*it out of me!!!

Posted by: musicsinmysoul | October 31, 2009 08:16 AM

Try to think of a scarier story that was lame.It didn't even scare my 6 year old daughter! Lame

Posted by: Kim | October 31, 2009 08:45 AM

this story was so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 09:38 AM

? not scary at all, u fails!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 09:52 AM

that waz relly scary i am only 10 stop trying to scare me lol

Posted by: jane | October 31, 2009 09:53 AM

that was an lame story bloody mary was scarier than this sh**t! next time make it a little scary -gosh im reading this on halloween and im not scared!!

Posted by: none | October 31, 2009 10:22 AM

that was not scary at all.i dont know why they posted that

Posted by: aleshia | October 31, 2009 10:24 AM

That story was f-ing trippy. I liked it a lot. You should write a book.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 01:31 PM

IT WASN'T THAT SCARY BUT IT WAS ENTERTAINING

Posted by: bEaSt mOde | October 31, 2009 01:38 PM

Horror Man

Posted by: Rodney Williamson | October 31, 2009 01:42 PM

ahh not that good

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 05:04 PM

not very scary to me.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2009 05:15 PM

Just entertaining...

Posted by: Maya | October 31, 2009 06:39 PM

omg omg omg omg i used to live in pennsylvania and now im freaked out lol i was so tensed while reading this my mom was wondering wat was wrong with me omg that was scary!

Posted by: lizzy | October 31, 2009 07:01 PM

I think this story was stupid. it needs a ending. i was disappointed when i read this!!!!!

Posted by: hillary | October 31, 2009 07:03 PM

omg my mom is working out when i read it it scared the crap out of me

Posted by: kim | November 1, 2009 09:04 AM

Wow that was really scary

Posted by: Anonymous | November 1, 2009 12:45 PM

omg that was soooo scary!

Posted by: hannah | November 1, 2009 02:01 PM

it is a real story live near where the story takes place

Posted by: me | November 9, 2009 11:47 AM

OMG that story was so boring but entataning lol xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxneed to make it longer

Posted by: stephanie | December 5, 2009 11:45 AM

That knocked my socks off! It's high time you wrote an anthology of spooky stories. You should read some of them at a library, and write more material. In a good way. I luhv your work. I hope to hear more of it on this website.

Posted by: no name please | December 5, 2009 06:45 PM

ARE TOU SERIOUS OMG!OMG!OMG!NASTY

Posted by: Anonymous | December 8, 2009 03:27 PM

wowthat wasnt scary at all

Posted by: C_LOS | December 9, 2009 06:43 PM

i bet that could really happen but with a real man not no ghost

Posted by: jason | December 19, 2009 09:12 PM

OMFG!
Its so freaking scary!
I live in pennsylvania too :l

Posted by: Nicole | December 23, 2009 02:50 PM

that was not scary

Posted by: asw | December 27, 2009 07:39 PM

i did not get scary

Posted by: lesly | December 28, 2009 03:00 PM

hey that was a reall good story!!!!! hha i loved the u have been very naughty i say that ALL the time!!!

Posted by: buggy | December 29, 2009 03:23 PM

Nice story.It didn't scare me because i'm not scared of ANYTHING but it was cool. =]

Posted by: Savannah | December 30, 2009 11:28 AM

I've been there. We stopped to see what would happen. It was dark outside and we heard something hitting the car. Me friend and I left right away. It was way too freaky

Posted by: ashley | January 6, 2010 04:19 PM

any more axe murder hollow stories?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: skylar | January 7, 2010 07:47 PM

THAT WAS S**T SCARY I WANT MORE!!

Posted by: Anonymous | January 9, 2010 01:14 AM

omg i thought thats was the supidest stoier id ever red

Posted by: alexys | January 9, 2010 01:44 PM

omg omg this story is a copy of a true story that my aunt told me but insteead its called hangmans hollow and its a real road in penn hills pennsylvania

Posted by: Anonymous | January 9, 2010 10:30 PM

WOW SCARY OR WHAT

Posted by: LittleMissMemi | January 13, 2010 12:07 PM

Wow that scared the shizz out of me!!

Posted by: Mandy | January 13, 2010 12:56 PM

im sorry but i have heard way scarier stories than that i think they need to make there stories idk more realistic

Posted by: Brianna | January 15, 2010 07:24 PM

Hmm ALL YOU PEOPLE GET OVER YOURSELF IF YOUR UNDER 10. Seriously??
THAT WASNT SCARY AT ALL!

This IS SCARY.

A six year old girl woke up with a zit on her cheek. She ignored cause she's been having that lately. Next 2 weeks the so called zit kept getting bigger and bigger until she was scared and worried. She told her mom. and her mom advice was to go wash it off. So she then took a warm bath. And accidently hit the zit. The zit burst and hundreds of baby spiders went out.
she found out a mother spider laid eggs on her cheek.

Posted by: Nikki(: | January 17, 2010 02:11 PM

It was scarry, well not really ive been thru worst.i am a shaman.

Posted by: jazzy | January 19, 2010 03:23 AM

that was a f***ing scary story but i've heard scarier

Posted by: makenzie winks | January 19, 2010 01:05 PM

Dude that story scared the crap out of me

Posted by: olivia | January 19, 2010 04:31 PM

wow now dats really scary man... i want to find out wat happens next!!!

Posted by: Desiree | January 21, 2010 11:20 AM

its pretty dumb as der is no proper ending. if it was den awesum!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | January 21, 2010 11:56 AM

That wasn't scary for me.When it is bed time i will tell this story to my family and see how freaked out they get

Posted by: Snowy | January 22, 2010 08:22 AM

i dont know if that was real or not but i know a better one

Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 04:33 PM

omg you can do better!!

Posted by: Anonymous | January 22, 2010 04:36 PM

I know a better story it was about this married couple they were on the ohio brige they had a wreck and went into the water and died. if you go down to the ohio bridge on halloween night you will see the woman looking for her husband and she is carrying her chopped off head and sometimes she gets real nervous and screams

Posted by: daisy | January 22, 2010 04:48 PM

that scared the heck out of me

Posted by: Anonymous | January 26, 2010 03:51 PM

wowowowowoowowowowo sary but it was a very nice love story hahahahahaha woooooooooooooooow

Posted by: joe | January 30, 2010 12:23 PM

OMG THAT STORY WAS SO SCARY i ALMOST WET MY PANTS WHERE DID YOU FIND IT?

Posted by: Anonymous | January 31, 2010 09:24 AM

if i saw a monster i would knock the hell out of him good day

Posted by: cajae pooh pooh | January 31, 2010 08:26 PM

it wasnt that scary but the ending wasnt that good he needs more

Posted by: kekee | February 1, 2010 05:28 PM

idk....this really wasnt that scary.i read it to my mom and my mom likes it but she doesnt think its scary...well not that scary

Posted by: lilly | February 1, 2010 07:22 PM

That WAS SO SCARY MY SISTERS THOUGHT IT WAS SCARY!!!!!!!OMG IT SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME TO

Posted by: Makayla | February 1, 2010 08:14 PM

I grew up in Erie and it was a great hangout for teens drinking and partying and scary as hell. Its one of those places you always remember and the story.

Posted by: tina | February 3, 2010 10:37 PM

This isnt scary just freeky !

Posted by: Abbie | February 4, 2010 03:16 PM

That story was OK, but not great. I'm kind of disappointed. A little scary.

Posted by: Bobby | February 7, 2010 11:30 AM

if gt 1 but how do u put it on there

Posted by: annonymous | February 8, 2010 04:11 PM

That Was So Freaky

Posted by: Hannah | February 8, 2010 04:11 PM

u know what u ppl have no taste on horror stories i have read al of em and that one is soooo not scary

Posted by: alec | February 9, 2010 04:22 PM

spooky

Posted by: edward | February 10, 2010 12:00 PM

simple and comedy storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Posted by: sahil | February 11, 2010 09:11 AM

wtf man super creepy.girls name reminds me of a girl i no

Posted by: tj | February 11, 2010 06:59 PM

story was most unscary story i have read

Posted by: that kid | February 12, 2010 04:25 PM

wow I was blown away with that

Posted by: Sila | February 13, 2010 09:44 AM

cool man scary!

Posted by: nightmare | February 13, 2010 02:11 PM

I got a scary story if little kids don't behave a man comes out of the closet but y dose he do that well when he was alive he used 2 kidnap kids and then eat their guts, eyes and their brain but then the other people found out and killed him and now he wants revenge

Posted by: karol | February 13, 2010 10:14 PM

the was #%^#@ scarey

Posted by: person | February 14, 2010 04:51 PM

Omg! while i was reading this my phone like rang and i coudn't find it crap! this is scary BUT I LOVED IT!

Posted by: erica | February 15, 2010 01:24 PM

awesomeee!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | February 15, 2010 06:27 PM

really a good book

Posted by: ian | February 16, 2010 04:50 PM

i wish the story would go on and on and on

Posted by: cheyenne | February 17, 2010 09:13 PM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | February 18, 2010 11:52 AM

i probibly sound like an idiot but is that true??:(

Posted by: gillian | February 19, 2010 09:29 AM

this is so gay and stupid

Posted by: stephanie | February 19, 2010 06:21 PM

this is gay so GAY i want to leave peace out suckers

Posted by: stephanie | February 19, 2010 06:22 PM

that wasn't scary

Posted by: Anonymous | February 19, 2010 11:32 PM

its like a hawaiian story i heard >.< really scary

Posted by: Anonymous | February 20, 2010 12:19 AM

yeah right

Posted by: Anonymous | February 20, 2010 09:55 AM

sic

Posted by: Anonymous | February 22, 2010 11:33 AM

omg that is ssssssssssssooooooooo.stupid i have seen more scary.

Posted by: Anonymous | February 23, 2010 06:31 PM

suuupeeer scaaaryyy!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | February 24, 2010 10:22 AM

it waz very s*** not scary at all

Posted by: Anonymous | February 25, 2010 06:30 AM

nothing interesting or scary,i think it's incomplete.Also,it's a repeated story.once it starts,it ends.

Posted by: Anonymous | February 26, 2010 03:57 AM

this story rock i love story like this lol so do my famliy and freinds and i am only 16

Posted by: Arriebelle | February 26, 2010 12:46 PM

I guess that was kinda scary, but stories don't scare me that much.
Although...
THAT STORY WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!

Posted by: marisa | February 28, 2010 10:22 AM

this is a f****** dumb story

Posted by: Anonymous | March 1, 2010 02:47 PM

THIS STORY WAS SAD!

Posted by: Anonymous | March 1, 2010 11:36 PM

THIS STORY WAZ WECKED;)

Posted by: AONYMOUS | March 1, 2010 11:49 PM

that was okaiii i guess i no loaads of better ones than that u guys fallll

Posted by: Angle Of Death2010 | March 2, 2010 01:35 PM

omg...omg...omg...dat is all i got 3 say is omg.....omg...omg....

Posted by: Anonymous | March 5, 2010 07:32 PM

that was freakin scary oooooooommmmmmmmmmmmgggggggggggg

Posted by: halee | March 7, 2010 08:00 PM

this was freaky

Posted by: Anonymous | March 13, 2010 03:22 PM

rocki'n story.

Posted by: Anonymous | March 14, 2010 04:05 PM

omg i scared :(

Posted by: Anonymous | March 17, 2010 02:51 PM

Wow lolz this is scary but my gwanpa told me this story except he said the cereal killer in greenwood and there was nothing about a ghost but the man was alive and didnt say names just used the girl and the boy and the boy's nails was scratching the top of the car and a police officer got the girl but the girl didn't die the police got to her I hate my gwanpa so much somtimes

Posted by: Brittany | March 19, 2010 01:32 PM

i love this story it is not scary for me. is it scary for you?

Posted by: andrea | March 22, 2010 11:42 AM

this is the worst scary story ever. i hope you get hacked by a glowing ghost.

Posted by: the journalism class | March 24, 2010 04:26 PM

O.O
Scary!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 05:06 PM

O.O
Scary!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 05:07 PM

that was crazzzzzyyyyyyyyyyy

Posted by: Anonymous | March 24, 2010 06:41 PM

u r stupid if u think that is scary

Posted by: Anonymous | March 26, 2010 12:38 AM

ok ummm that was not really scary no offense but it was not original AT ALL

Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 05:12 PM

gay much

Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 06:23 PM

G.A.Y...it was ok

Posted by: Anonymous | March 28, 2010 08:11 PM

cool

Posted by: Anonymous | April 1, 2010 09:49 AM

this was a REAL scary story.... it gave ME chills!

Posted by: jennifer | April 1, 2010 01:58 PM

That was dumb.

Posted by: Savannah | April 1, 2010 11:41 PM

omg i read this story at a sleep over and the doorbell rang cuz of thee pizza guy it scared the h*ll out of me and my friend screamed holy sh*t

Posted by: samantha | April 5, 2010 09:13 AM

I want more they should make some more

Posted by: Anonymous | April 6, 2010 12:25 PM

Ya scary scary NOT it would be for a 5 year old (hopefully)

Posted by: Crazylittlekid20 | April 6, 2010 04:08 PM

I definitely wouldn't want to see or meet that lunatic! Aren't there any ghost police whom we can contact and report this one?

Posted by: me | April 8, 2010 02:19 AM

I read this over spring break at 12 o'clock in the morning, I didn't even fall asleep till 2!!! This is the best story that I read yet! Upload some more like these! My gf hates me now cuz I sent this to her :D

Posted by: Josh | April 9, 2010 05:25 PM

my god! i almost crapped my pants when i read that !!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Delila | April 11, 2010 02:02 PM

STUPD

Posted by: Anonymous | April 14, 2010 08:21 PM

u ppl r lame dat wuz nt scary

Posted by: Anonymous | April 17, 2010 11:31 AM

like it! hmmmm!! i want more!

Posted by: ilove kisses | April 18, 2010 01:24 AM

that was so scary

Posted by: Lauren | April 18, 2010 10:40 AM

This is tottttallly the most scary story I've read on here! Seriously! And I'm tough 2 scare! U guys should read no tresspassing its similiar but not as scary! Dude where do u get this stuff???????? :)

Posted by: tori | April 18, 2010 04:53 PM

that was not scary at allllllll

Posted by: Anonymous | April 19, 2010 03:41 PM

that was scary tell me more

Posted by: Anonymous | April 20, 2010 04:45 PM

very pridictable

Posted by: Anonymous | April 22, 2010 05:49 AM

I'm hard to scare when it comes to stories that are supposed to scare people.

Posted by: Anonymous | April 23, 2010 08:04 PM

that story was awsome it scared me im like OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! that part when it told me the part when the guy had an axe and the guy killed Ned on the throte ittttttt wasssssss soooooooo coolllllllllll

Posted by: kelsey | April 25, 2010 01:59 PM

well i Have to admit it was scary but it could have been better i mean but hey thats just my opinion :D

Posted by: Anonymous | April 25, 2010 03:30 PM

that was a good story

Posted by: Anonymous | April 26, 2010 11:47 AM

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT WAS COOOOOOLLL PIMP DAD OUT

Posted by: Anonymous | April 28, 2010 02:42 PM

Awsome!!! If I had a choice to rate this story between the numbers 1 to 10... I would have to rate it 101% of complete awsomeness!!!!

Posted by: OMG! | April 28, 2010 04:42 PM

OMG iloved this story it was so amazing dude were u get those stories?

Posted by: trinidad | April 28, 2010 06:56 PM

not scary at all

Posted by: K-WOWWZ | April 28, 2010 09:00 PM

omg it was totally the best story ever

Posted by: anonymous | April 29, 2010 03:05 PM

that was creepie

Posted by: hi | April 29, 2010 05:22 PM

AWSOME STORY

Posted by: SPIKY | May 1, 2010 01:40 PM

OMG that was scary!!!

Posted by: michael | May 2, 2010 01:52 PM

omg that was very scary!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | May 4, 2010 06:26 PM

this waz good

Posted by: kristina | May 6, 2010 03:43 PM

that was gay

Posted by: anonymous | May 7, 2010 01:24 AM

OMG my mouse slid acrossed the tabel!!! I was so scared then my phone rang 3 times and stopped!!!then again.and im alone in the house!!!!!
RING RING RING went the phone then i answerd it and it was a song called tIk ToK

Posted by: samantha | May 7, 2010 06:48 PM

are you guys serious? this wasnt scary are you all like, 8 years old or something? get a life.

Posted by: Danielle | May 8, 2010 06:42 PM

you ever hard of the story the hook basically the same thing but he was string above the car and was tied to the car when she was trying to go away the car made the noose get tighter

Posted by: anonymous | May 9, 2010 09:47 PM

that was the most cheesey story that we have ever heard but i have 2 say that it was pretty scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: aiyanna and gwen | May 11, 2010 09:28 AM

cool

Posted by: Anonymous | May 11, 2010 12:53 PM

that was not scary it was gruesome and some bits were scary
but auwesome strory altho it werent scary

Posted by: Anonymous | May 12, 2010 12:04 PM

wow that story was soooo scary!! I have 2 read a scary story in class tomorrow and this is the one i am gonna read!!!

Posted by: justin bieber16 | May 12, 2010 12:41 PM

Holy s***! I am so reading that to nine year olds!

Posted by: Alexis | May 14, 2010 09:58 AM

that was scary !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :+

Posted by: Anonymous | May 16, 2010 08:13 PM

why the ghost kill the boy?

Posted by: Anonymous | May 16, 2010 09:47 PM

rrrrrr ok =0 lol

Posted by: Elisha | May 17, 2010 12:49 AM

swweeet

Posted by: irving | May 17, 2010 12:49 PM

Wow i'm like. . .scared lol that was a very good story and i hope there's a sequel :)

Posted by: Tara Swanson | May 18, 2010 11:44 AM

ohh my god u almost made me piss on my trousers

Posted by: Anonymous | May 18, 2010 01:12 PM

um this was a really good story this was a cheap imitation of texas chainsaw maasacree

Posted by: wat do u care | May 20, 2010 01:03 PM

wot da hel was dat???!!!

so not scary

Posted by: udonidano | May 20, 2010 01:07 PM

i have to admit this was WAY better then the bloody mary story.

Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 10:00 AM

interesting, but needs more backround to build up more suspense and isnt as obvious

Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 07:47 PM

I live in erie....and me and my buddies go there all the time and it is a creepy place. the building is burned down but gypsies and abandoned houses surround the area

Posted by: Anonymous | May 21, 2010 11:02 PM

This was sooo not scary

Posted by: ebbi | May 22, 2010 07:14 AM

damn this was so freakin scary!this is just like the NO TRESSPASSING story(on this website)! i wish they'd make a horror movie about this!!

Posted by: cherry | May 22, 2010 10:31 PM

thats mint

Posted by: Anonymous | May 24, 2010 08:42 AM

nice i like scary stories

Posted by: Anonymous | May 25, 2010 02:35 PM

OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS AWESOME! I NEED TO FREAK MY FRIENDS OUT WITH THAT.

Posted by: Sarah | May 25, 2010 04:52 PM

OMG i hope this not happen to me.. so freaking scary and nasty

Posted by: Monica Santos | May 27, 2010 09:27 AM

that waz awsome

Posted by: Anonymous | May 27, 2010 11:48 AM

OMG?!?! IT WUZ VERY SURPRISING AND ALL BUT IT WUSNT THAT SCARY I MEAN WHO IN THE H*LL WOULD GET OUT OF THE CAR U WAIT TILL SOMEONE U KNOW KNOCKS ON THE WINDOW OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT BUT HONESTLY IT WUSNT THAT SCARY H*LL IT WUSNT SCARY!!!!!!

Posted by: kim | May 27, 2010 05:49 PM

OMG while i was reading the end, my sister's gay emo songs came on and i almost had a heart attack!

Posted by: wow.. | June 2, 2010 02:19 AM

OMG THAT IS F***EN SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 2, 2010 02:09 PM

haha i get to go back there for the 15th time in october and 3 years ago i swear i saw someone in the trees. i go every year on halloween.
it IS a true story. i live in pennsylvania too.

Posted by: ashley D. | June 2, 2010 05:37 PM

siht yrots si yrev driew lets see who can crack this code

Posted by: joel abelardo reta juarez | June 2, 2010 06:17 PM

That left me hanging. u r a awsome writer. u should write a book.

Posted by: Anonymous | June 5, 2010 12:43 PM

freaky man just freaky!!

Posted by: bill | June 7, 2010 02:12 PM

OMG!!! that story was awesome! i love scary stories and even i have to admit that was pretty good!! you should right a book!!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 8, 2010 05:30 PM

omg i hate scary stories but we r doin this thing were we tell each other stories ahhhhh dont tell me such scary stuff

Posted by: clarissa | June 9, 2010 04:33 AM

o kewl i want to be susan

Posted by: dassssss | June 9, 2010 11:40 PM

That was crappy, didn't scare me at all.

Posted by: Jasmine | June 12, 2010 12:28 PM

♥ it! good one! :)

Posted by: Anonymous | June 12, 2010 04:52 PM

its so gross how they said ned was blowing in the wind and bumping in to the tree it was so sad!!!

Posted by: tessa liz & jewel | June 12, 2010 09:35 PM

that was so scary!! after i read someone knocked on the door and it scared the living crap outta me

Posted by: audrey | June 14, 2010 02:27 PM

scary or bloody what!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 16, 2010 10:05 AM

um if they both died how who saw the ghost????? and could still talk about it?

Posted by: robbytrees | June 21, 2010 03:21 PM

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And she died to! AWESOME! That was cooler then the haunting hour! AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Posted by: lexi | June 24, 2010 12:54 PM

WOW ....that was scaaary!!! Was it true???

Posted by: Robii | June 26, 2010 04:07 PM

it was ok

Posted by: Anonymous | June 27, 2010 03:07 PM

good

Posted by: Anonymous | June 27, 2010 03:12 PM

there we go finaly a skin crawling storie. yeah babie that shiz was scariieee.

Posted by: taylorr | June 27, 2010 09:45 PM

it was not scary at all

Posted by: ebtihal | June 28, 2010 05:52 AM

tis story was sooooooooooooo scary that i jumped when my phone rang

Posted by: karla | June 28, 2010 02:14 PM

loooooook!! wht's behind of you?!!

Posted by: Anonymous | June 29, 2010 03:29 AM

awsome

Posted by: joe | June 29, 2010 02:22 PM

lol u think that was scary ? omg listen to my version. once there was a ouple driving along and there had been reports of a freeky figure moving through teh woods were they were and then they suddenly had a puncture so the husband got out and went in search of help and the wife locked the doors and after no time at all there was huge thunping noices coming from the roof but she was too scared to go out . but eventually the police came and said to her come out of the car its the police but what ever u do dont look back . but she did look back and saw the crazed axe man on the roof of her car holding an axe in 1 hand and the head of ........ her husband!!!!!!! lol

Posted by: jjake | June 30, 2010 11:57 AM

OMG?? SO AWSOME

Posted by: tinkerbell | June 30, 2010 04:21 PM

my computer made a noise as i read this and i jumped... this is scary

Posted by: Anonymous | July 1, 2010 12:32 AM

oh now my throat hurts. it was creepy, i wz on the edge of my seat! man, wat a cliffhanger! maybe i'll write my own ending...

Posted by: sportychic | July 1, 2010 01:21 PM

I read a version of that back in elementary school in a book of ghost stories I seem to have misplaced since then... There were only slight variations to the details...

Posted by: The Dead Body Man | July 2, 2010 07:29 AM

Omg I finished reading it and my sister opened the door...woah, u should have seen me, I jumped out of my pants and screamed for 3 min. I wuz soooo frikin scared!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Cyra | July 2, 2010 05:01 PM

very spooky!totally awesome!

Posted by: aditi singh | July 3, 2010 05:36 AM

That was so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | July 6, 2010 12:14 PM

that was pretty good but i want to know what happend next!!!

Posted by: simrat | July 6, 2010 01:10 PM

that was the scariest thing i ever read

Posted by: Anonymous | July 7, 2010 09:37 PM

Really lame, was hoping for a scare.

Posted by: Jay | July 9, 2010 01:40 AM

that was not scary!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | July 11, 2010 06:55 PM

That wasnt so scary. Freakin lame

Posted by: Anonymous | July 11, 2010 11:56 PM

Sounds like an urban legend.

Posted by: Dezz | July 12, 2010 03:55 AM

lol that scared my little sister but me and my big sister wasn't scared at all!

Posted by: Anonymous | July 14, 2010 09:24 PM

That was scary!

Posted by: Krys | July 16, 2010 04:25 PM

thumbs up nice story

Posted by: will | July 16, 2010 05:02 PM

LOved this story...Freaked me out about the dude with the ax asking her to get out of the car...

Posted by: chelly2329 | July 17, 2010 11:53 AM

OMG THIS WAS THE SCARYEST STORY I READ I WAS SCARED TO DEATH

Posted by: bratz | July 17, 2010 04:31 PM

that was da worst story ever

Posted by: Anonymous | July 20, 2010 05:43 AM

yeah it is cool

Posted by: uknown | July 21, 2010 02:46 AM

i have heard so many different versions of this story. its one of my favorites!!!

Posted by: Marissa | July 21, 2010 12:12 PM

kinda scary

Posted by: Anonymous | July 21, 2010 05:55 PM

Ok, whoever wrote that spider/zit story (yes you Brianna) and you probably won't read this but moving on. #1 YOU know nothing bout scary cause and ax murderer is much scarier than a zit with spiders. Oh yeh and FYI thats not even how the spider story goes! Lame!!

Posted by: Gabi | July 24, 2010 11:47 PM

OMG that scared me so bad i could just emagen it. i want to here more! (In the day time of course or id be sh**ing my self at nite lol)

Posted by: Lilly | July 28, 2010 08:31 AM

omg this storie is f**** scary I want to know more I want to know where you get these stories there so good!!!!

Posted by: yajaira | July 28, 2010 03:32 PM

I want my mommy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BUT GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: cierra | July 29, 2010 10:06 AM

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Posted by: ALEX | July 29, 2010 10:11 AM

That waz f***ing awsome! I loved the ending!

Posted by: ILOVEscary stories kid115 | July 29, 2010 04:44 PM

that was awesome thay should make a scarer verson so cool:) 10 out of 10 not scared great tittle

Posted by: Penelope | July 30, 2010 11:52 PM

Excellent story absolutely a 10 if not more.

Posted by: Fred Kujawka | August 3, 2010 08:24 PM

My heart is pounding like CRAZY!

Posted by: pookie | August 5, 2010 12:21 PM

omg! that must have been the most scaryist story i have ever read

Posted by: jassmine | August 5, 2010 03:26 PM

cool .. !! write more .. !!

Posted by: :) | August 5, 2010 03:47 PM

Now im scared cuz of the guy ned my name is ned too btw i went to my car and sudently i heard a bump while waiting for my sister i was in shock when i look it was my dog scared of the lighting

Posted by: Ned williams | August 5, 2010 11:08 PM

Not really scary unless you're there.

Posted by: Motiur Muhith | August 6, 2010 10:53 AM

it i scared the crap aut of me i loved it LOL :)

Posted by: karina | August 8, 2010 08:28 AM

MAKE IT LONGER ALRIGHT

Posted by: karina | August 8, 2010 08:33 AM

Story is not at all scary ....

Posted by: shush | August 8, 2010 01:35 PM

dat wuz pretty cool. Ihave heard many other versions though that were better.

Posted by: Shorty Smim | August 8, 2010 06:03 PM

dang tht scared the crap out of me!

Posted by: Blake Hera | August 9, 2010 05:29 PM

ew. that was horrible !

Posted by: haha | August 9, 2010 08:02 PM

that was scary

Posted by: haidee | August 9, 2010 08:53 PM

I Jumped out of my seat.

Posted by: Anonymous | August 9, 2010 10:51 PM

peed on myself. I WANT MORE!

Posted by: amaiya scott | August 9, 2010 10:54 PM

holy cow thats scary,

Posted by: Anonymous | August 10, 2010 12:10 AM

who comes up with this scary awsomenous!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Posted by: tommy | August 10, 2010 02:42 AM

oh crap im not moving out of my seat after that i heard it before but you made it sound more scarier

Posted by: fgf | August 10, 2010 08:44 AM

omg man that scared the **** out of me. well the story didnt only a little bit and it was halleween aswell then it started litghing and the door started creaking in my house that was built in 1832 and it is really haunted

Posted by: ryan | August 10, 2010 09:49 AM

wow that scared me i hope that dont happen to me

Posted by: Anonymous | August 10, 2010 12:40 PM

omg tht was so funny yet veryyyy scary lol jk about the funny part............hope i dont have a nightmare.BOOOOO

Posted by: morgan | August 10, 2010 04:40 PM

kool storie wished thr was more 2 read

Posted by: cammy | August 10, 2010 06:45 PM

very good...
actually, this's 1st stry that made my heart pound and i dont get scared that easily

Posted by: daria | August 10, 2010 07:04 PM

That Was so sssscccaaaaaaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy omg it scared my mom and dad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: jj | August 11, 2010 09:06 AM

OMG me and my friend thought it was well good

Posted by: jessica | August 11, 2010 11:43 AM

that was scary it gave me chills

Posted by: Taylor | August 11, 2010 03:06 PM

omg when i was done someone knocked on my door effing scared me

Posted by: catelynn | August 12, 2010 01:08 AM

WOW! sure was somthing gotta tell my friends about this one. I realy like scarie stories! they are my favourate. are they yours?

Posted by: Anonymous | August 12, 2010 08:07 AM

I read another story like this on scaryforkids.com but there were police and they told her to not turn around but she did and saw her boyfriend.... This one was wwwwaaaaaay scarier o_O

Posted by: Erophalite | August 12, 2010 09:19 AM

that was scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: polina | August 12, 2010 11:35 AM

that was scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: polina | August 12, 2010 11:36 AM

that was really scary your good at telling scary stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: polina | August 12, 2010 03:19 PM

I wanted more...

Posted by: Yhiene | August 12, 2010 10:10 PM

pretty good though some are better! LOL!!! yo!

Posted by: yo123 | August 13, 2010 04:16 AM

it was not that scary but it was okay

Posted by: Anonymous | August 13, 2010 05:19 AM

That was fecken scary and it left me on
eadge of my seat my mother read it to and she say the ame thing.!!!!!!

Posted by: savannah | August 13, 2010 01:13 PM

Not as scary but it's a good story 9/10 I'd say

Posted by: Dom | August 14, 2010 12:34 PM

wow... that was scary but ive seen scarier

Posted by: clever | August 14, 2010 01:34 PM

that was Toatally AAAAAAAWWWWWWSSOMMMEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | August 15, 2010 12:24 AM

o wow dat story was so scary wat happened next i need to noe

Posted by: Anonymous | August 15, 2010 02:56 PM

is that fake or is it real? i'm not scared,lol

Posted by: kali | August 15, 2010 03:30 PM

im at home alone reading this...BAD IDEA!

Posted by: Cati | August 16, 2010 10:34 AM

that story was the best hahahaha

Posted by: Anonymous | August 16, 2010 12:43 PM

that was creepiest ghost story i have ever heard it gave me goose bumps.

Posted by: kori | August 16, 2010 05:29 PM

This story was awesome

Posted by: Brent | August 16, 2010 07:59 PM

I've heard the same type of story only more scary

Posted by: charlie | August 18, 2010 10:33 AM

wow

Posted by: Anonymous | August 18, 2010 05:22 PM

Thiis Is A Mad As Storyy.. Should Of had A Better Endiinq... (:

Posted by: Shakiira | August 19, 2010 12:16 AM

i dont think that is a scary story. it is just a simple story....

Posted by: laurence | August 19, 2010 04:02 AM

I remember my Grandmother telling me this when i was little & i used to walk through lanes at night on my way home on my own. She told me a this story but it was basically just a mad man & the lights were police & when she stepped out of the car the officer told her not to look behind her but of course she cant help herself & sees a man with her husbands head on an ax sat on the roof of the car hitting the head gently on the roof & that was what the bumping was. That freaked me out more.

Posted by: nicole Emma Raybaud | August 19, 2010 08:58 AM

holy geeze that was awesome

Posted by: brandie | August 19, 2010 12:40 PM

i had a story like this but very more cruel and like an urban legend

Posted by: danielle | August 19, 2010 02:55 PM

bahah, that's creepy. i don't think it's real, though.

Posted by: chalon | August 20, 2010 09:14 AM

this is so scary i cant even sleep for like 2 or 3 days

Posted by: lisa | August 20, 2010 04:08 PM

That sounds sorta like the story hangman have u heard it?

Posted by: Kayla | August 20, 2010 09:21 PM

BOOOOOO

Posted by: Anonymous | August 22, 2010 02:15 AM

oh mi mama its so scary i ran 2 d cr dude that ws so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | August 22, 2010 06:55 AM

Emilee- This is soo freaky i read it and almmost peed myself, wow, terrifiying, remind me to never go on tht road and better yet, tht state.

Posted by: Emilee AND Mikayla | August 22, 2010 03:38 PM

Emilee- This is soo freaky i read it and almmost peed myself, wow, terrifiying, remind me to never go on tht road and better yet, tht state.
Mikayla- shizzle dude, wtf tht was weirrrrrd...btw, i truly believe in all this crap...ghosts, demons, potergiests, its not freakin joke...beware dude, just be freakin careful 0_0

Posted by: Emilee AND Mikayla | August 22, 2010 03:40 PM

i expected more chilling gore. but it was nice.

Posted by: SATI SAHADEO | August 22, 2010 06:19 PM

OMG! That was sooooo scary i heard a story like that before but this one was much scarier!

Posted by: emmy | August 22, 2010 07:13 PM

hehe

Posted by: god of the foooooood | August 23, 2010 08:02 PM

I was hyperventilating

Posted by: Anonymous | August 24, 2010 10:31 AM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | August 24, 2010 12:07 PM

i read this to my sister she thought it was scary but i did'nt

Posted by: dana | August 24, 2010 01:43 PM

hey is it real f**k man i got so f**king scared

Posted by: Anonymous | August 24, 2010 03:31 PM

o.m.g that is so scary !!!! =,(

Posted by: avery | August 25, 2010 08:16 PM

WOW AWESOME I TOLD ALL MY FRIENDS I NEVER WANNA DRIVE IN THE DARK AGAIN WAT HAPPENED NECT I NEED NOT TO KNOW

Posted by: unkown | August 26, 2010 12:19 AM

it gave me the frights last nite.

Posted by: riley | August 26, 2010 02:40 AM

That was not scary at all its a waist of a storyQ!!!!!!lol

Posted by: Natasha | August 26, 2010 07:25 AM

omg that was AWSOME love these stories!

Posted by: Jack | August 26, 2010 09:27 AM

man that scary

Posted by: jay | August 27, 2010 06:08 AM

is it really real tho ?

Posted by: Anonymous | August 27, 2010 12:29 PM

OMG that was SSSCCCAAARRRYYY!!!!!!!!

Posted by: lucy | August 27, 2010 03:31 PM

i am gonig to share this at a sleepover this rocks

Posted by: Anonymous | August 27, 2010 03:37 PM

OMFG that was scary, even though it isn't night :p

Posted by: Lainey | August 28, 2010 01:11 PM

im 12 and i wasnt scared but it was good

Posted by: maggie | August 28, 2010 09:08 PM

ive read a story like this before, but you told it so much better with so much detail and it was just amazing!

Posted by: animeobsessed | August 29, 2010 01:25 PM

that was not scary at all

Posted by: Anonymous | August 29, 2010 03:44 PM

that is scary

Posted by: Chavone Bijou | August 29, 2010 05:52 PM

not scary at all

Posted by: Anonymous | August 29, 2010 06:40 PM

i think it wuz alright i wasnt that scared but i bet i would or any one would be scared if u were there....i give u a seven...:/

Posted by: Anonymous | August 29, 2010 07:31 PM

o haha my teacher read that to us in class a couple of days ago good story by the way

Posted by: lunatrix & bellatrix | August 29, 2010 07:48 PM

that freaked me outt.do you make these stories up?

Posted by: broke | August 30, 2010 04:45 AM

wow dat was really scary

Posted by: Anonymous | August 30, 2010 06:03 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!! i told this story at camp around the bon-fire, and half of my friends peed there pants. i swear!

Posted by: Mary | August 30, 2010 08:24 PM

lol.... the hook man is pretty much the same, atleast the way he kills people is... slits their throat, hangs them by their feet on a tree branch, letting the hands scrape against the roof of the car, making sounds and stuff, then scaring the girl, and then the girl dies to.... that's not that scary! unless it was real that it....

Posted by: Nichole | August 30, 2010 11:39 PM

i indeed enjoyed reading this story thumbs up feel kinda bad for poor ned

Posted by: Anonymous | August 31, 2010 01:40 AM

It was not so scary. I want more scariest stories.

Posted by: Ramish Masood. | August 31, 2010 05:02 AM

sexy story man, really scary!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | August 31, 2010 10:01 AM

Crap, I had no idea that was coming.

Posted by: Kassie | August 31, 2010 10:58 PM

SO FREAKING Scary i loved the part about the dead guy thump thump lol an creepy at the same time a realy good one

Posted by: lol face 2240 | September 1, 2010 11:08 AM

omg this scared the heck out of me. AND MY TEACHER.

Posted by: Anonymous | September 1, 2010 02:35 PM

OMG THAT WAS SSOOOOOOO SCARY!!!

Posted by: Amy | September 1, 2010 05:21 PM

This is really scary when the ghost of a man with an axe in his hands were talking to her.

Posted by: Lynnelle Callo | September 2, 2010 10:44 PM

omg!that was so scary u know its true my friend and me went to theforest...

Posted by: eesha | September 2, 2010 11:35 PM

I wish there was more!!!!!

Posted by: sarah | September 3, 2010 03:03 PM

that scared me to death. and it is the perfect story to tell when you go camping.

Posted by: mackenzie bohn | September 3, 2010 03:27 PM

scary !!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 3, 2010 04:52 PM

see now this is scaty...kinda not enough to give me nightmares yet

Posted by: SAMMY | September 4, 2010 11:35 AM

that was good but too short make it longer

Posted by: layla | September 4, 2010 11:54 PM

really lame........very predictable.....

Posted by: arun | September 5, 2010 06:17 AM

Hahaha, now i have many scary stories to tell my fellow girl scouts when we go to camp next saturday... *evil laughter* >:D

Posted by: Erin | September 5, 2010 06:54 AM

wow i want more that was awesome but really it's not scary i have watched scary movies and that's not scary! I wonder if the lady dies well i have no clue because they stopped the story so i don't know!!!!!
OK ever wrote this is A-W-E-S-O-M-E

Posted by: grace | September 5, 2010 04:39 PM

awesome man so scary................i was scared to death... but cool man ..!!!!

Posted by: deepu | September 5, 2010 08:42 PM

great story but it dosent scare me at all

Posted by: mike | September 6, 2010 04:09 PM

my mom used to tell us these stories in the dark i remember this one ned was trying to get to a gas station on 7 hills (ellicot city md)

Posted by: Anonymous | September 6, 2010 06:41 PM

WOW F*CKING SCARY.

Posted by: Anonymous | September 7, 2010 01:42 AM

Not really that scary it is a little but ive seen alot scaryer

Posted by: Zara | September 7, 2010 07:43 PM

DUDE! that was scary!

Posted by: vanessa | September 9, 2010 10:38 AM

if u think thats scary i live by it and its all true

Posted by: Anonymous | September 9, 2010 06:29 PM

That was so scary I almost screamed my head off! OMG that scared me

Posted by: Amaya | September 10, 2010 05:21 PM

That was soooo NOT scary, lol, i thought it would be freakier

Posted by: Notscaredgirl | September 11, 2010 04:19 AM

not at all scary expected more but good

Posted by: bidisha panja | September 11, 2010 11:23 PM

that wasnt scarry at all!!!! You people are pussies! haha :D

Posted by: unseticfied customer | September 12, 2010 12:28 AM

holy crap this as freaking creppy as heck!!!omg is this freakin real?!

Posted by: punkprincess | September 12, 2010 01:26 PM

ima have nightmares till i'm 50

Posted by: Anonymous | September 12, 2010 05:44 PM

i'm not going to be able to sleep tonight

Posted by: Anonymous | September 12, 2010 11:00 PM

that was a great story

Posted by: Anonymous | September 13, 2010 11:30 AM

i need something more hardcore

Posted by: misterious | September 13, 2010 02:01 PM

that almost made me pee my pants

Posted by: shonda | September 13, 2010 05:05 PM

IM SRY TO SAY BUT U GUYS SUK AT SPELLING [i know i spelled suck wrong but thats how i spell it] but anyways good comments effing great book dude encore encore

Posted by: Anonymous | September 14, 2010 12:11 AM

I read another version of this story where the light was the police and when the girl was walking away, the officer told her not to look back but she did and her boyfriend was hung from the tree and the bump sounds were his feet hitting the roof of the car. Good version though!

Posted by: person | September 14, 2010 01:48 AM

It's not brutal for me, I'm looking for something nastier.

Posted by: Ralph Joveth Cabunducan | September 14, 2010 06:52 AM

omg that was the scariest thing i have ever read hahaha

Posted by: kaycee | September 14, 2010 11:55 AM

Wow, That Was A Pretty Good Story:)

Posted by: AliciaNichole | September 14, 2010 01:05 PM

it's so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | September 14, 2010 06:37 PM

Nice one

Posted by: Binaya | September 15, 2010 12:08 AM

cool please make a book!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 15, 2010 01:47 AM

omfg i dont belive this it scared me and my sis because her name is susan and her bf is ned weried huh

Posted by: paulina | September 15, 2010 01:53 PM

now im gonna be scared when ever im driving at night!

Posted by: Alannah | September 15, 2010 02:38 PM

this story is so scary... i wonder what gonnah happen next.... beside this i like the story it is intereseting.... make more story about this story....

Posted by: mary | September 15, 2010 03:56 PM

OMG that was so not scary!!!

Posted by: Jessica patrick | September 16, 2010 12:57 PM

OMG that was so not scary!!!

Posted by: Jessica patrick | September 16, 2010 12:58 PM

that was totaly wickid jkjkjkjkjkjkjkj

Posted by: kayla | September 16, 2010 02:50 PM

that was not scary!!!!!!!

Posted by: prissell | September 16, 2010 06:49 PM

that was so scary..........

Posted by: Anonymous | September 16, 2010 07:24 PM

TOTALLY FREAKY! TOTALLY FREAKY

Posted by: amanda | September 16, 2010 07:26 PM

i would have like to hear more, but even though it wasjust alittl scary it was still good.

Posted by: luna | September 16, 2010 08:22 PM

that was cccccccccooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllliomfg

Posted by: Anonymous | September 17, 2010 12:54 PM

Little bit scary

Posted by: jiss | September 17, 2010 04:52 PM

OMG you could tell what was going to happen it was not scary..............

Posted by: lilcetan | September 17, 2010 06:42 PM

dat wus f**kin scary

Posted by: molly | September 18, 2010 07:21 AM

um...hookman legend...duh

Posted by: vanessa | September 18, 2010 03:19 PM

That was creepy

Posted by: Keyonna | September 18, 2010 10:51 PM

was a gud story wish evry thng was mentioned in detail n even wht happnd latter..................

Posted by: sara | September 19, 2010 02:14 AM

actually, thats a real story, its told a little different but it is based on a true story

Posted by: jessy | September 19, 2010 10:16 AM

that was sick waanted more :L

Posted by: mossey | September 20, 2010 06:00 AM

i am gonna make this a black metal song lol

Posted by: Anonymous | September 20, 2010 09:47 AM

scared the crap out of me.

Posted by: Christine | September 20, 2010 10:25 AM

oh thats cool,,all my hair goes up,,such a scary story

Posted by: charme | September 20, 2010 03:24 PM

i luved the story

Posted by: olivia | September 20, 2010 05:24 PM

that was so freaking scary :(

Posted by: rrrtttt | September 20, 2010 06:52 PM

yo!
tht was a scary story.i read it upstairs in me room and i came running downstairs and nearly dropped and fell down the stairs.

Posted by: sanah khan | September 21, 2010 12:49 PM

wow. not scary at alll!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 21, 2010 01:14 PM

WOWW!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO STUPID!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 21, 2010 01:15 PM

i think the author should put on more scary words ..
it is incomplete !
but its good

Posted by: shiara mancilla | September 21, 2010 10:36 PM

that was so awsome it wasnt that scary i started laughing my a** off

Posted by: mikayla | September 22, 2010 12:31 PM

loved it

Posted by: chicken | September 22, 2010 01:24 PM

cool

Posted by: Anonymous | September 22, 2010 02:38 PM

scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: liam | September 22, 2010 03:22 PM

OMG that was scary,but I always love'd scary storys

Posted by: Lizzy | September 22, 2010 04:56 PM

that was sooo freaking scary!

Posted by: unknown | September 22, 2010 07:15 PM

im so flippin scared that scared the holy crap out of me

Posted by: zena315 | September 22, 2010 07:34 PM

I've heard that before.

Posted by: Kurtburgah | September 22, 2010 11:36 PM

What was so scary?

Posted by: Shannon | September 23, 2010 01:36 PM

i love this its so coolio.

Posted by: Blue Shoes | September 23, 2010 01:47 PM

PEOPLES! Seriously?! The reason it doesn't have an ending is because it has suspense. Which makes you sit on the edge of your seat and want more. A lot of book series do it...And ya'll really need to learn how to spell!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 23, 2010 06:18 PM

that was scary as hell

Posted by: Anonymous | September 24, 2010 07:19 PM

This is an urban legend/campfire story. In some versions Susan has enough sense to stay in the car, hears scraping on the car's roof, is rescued by the cops, and discovers the scraping was the sound of Ned's fingernails. Ned, of course, is dead and hanging upside down from a tree. The hookman story is different--couple hears a news story on the radio about an escaped killer with a hook for a hand, guy drives his girfriend home, goes around to open her car door for her, sees an arm with a hook for a hand hanging from the door handle. To get the full effect of these stories they should be told, not read, in the dark at a sleep over or a camp out.
BTW this is the American Folklore website, not the American Gorefest website. If you want blood and guts look elsewhere--try Googling "blood and guts."

Posted by: Folklore fan | September 25, 2010 03:14 AM

OMG!! My Dad Told Me This Story And It Freaked The Hell Out Of Me And It Still Does!! :O

Posted by: Rachael | September 25, 2010 01:35 PM

This story crept me out!

Posted by: Breeze | September 25, 2010 02:36 PM

I LIVED THERE NO JOKE! I lived in Erie, Pennsylvania on Thomas Road in the area of Ax Murder Hollow. My family built a house there and we lived there with out dying in the woods. It's a pretty place.

Yah, the story is scary I know...

Posted by: Morgana | September 25, 2010 09:46 PM

OH MY GOD!!!! SOOO SCARY!!! POOR NED!!! AND SUSAN!!!

Posted by: Izzy | September 25, 2010 10:17 PM

omg is that for real that for real

Posted by: mikaela winiata | September 25, 2010 10:44 PM

that was kinda scary...

Posted by: noname | September 26, 2010 10:29 AM

sounds a LOT like a story i read in a book, but overall still very good

Posted by: Anonymous | September 26, 2010 04:28 PM

so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | September 27, 2010 12:26 PM

this story was kindda sad .
;(

Posted by: Anonymous | September 27, 2010 05:54 PM

man that skard the curd out of me.:p

Posted by: Steve | September 27, 2010 06:06 PM

amzin lol

Posted by: Anonymous | September 28, 2010 08:42 AM

That was great. I read it in complete silnece & while my brother was sleeping on the couch & I had to keep checking that he was there & wasn't going to scare me. You should read it in a podcast. Awesome!

Posted by: Anonymous | September 28, 2010 12:06 PM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | September 28, 2010 03:28 PM

Wow I was surprised when I read about axe murder hollow because when I was 15 years old my brothers and sisters were sitting around a campfire telling ghost stories and I told them a story just like this one pretty much word for word I,m 47 now talk about freaky my siblings thought I had made it up but when I was told it when I was 10 I was told it was a true story.

Posted by: Rebecca Laney | September 28, 2010 05:33 PM

Omg! Why did it have to end! Its was to exciting!

Posted by: Brooke | September 29, 2010 08:25 PM

Wow that was so frickin funny

Posted by: Lilly | September 29, 2010 09:35 PM

that scared the crap out of me and im only 11

Posted by: charlotte | September 30, 2010 06:29 AM

i would of never got out of the car lol. that story is really scary.!!!!!! :p

Posted by: marissa | September 30, 2010 08:05 AM

that was a very good story kalub harmon

Posted by: bob your moma | September 30, 2010 08:55 AM

I LOVE THIS!!!!!! IT CANT BE OVER!!!!!! THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!!!

Posted by: Rose2014 | September 30, 2010 10:59 AM

that is some scary story

Posted by: Cristal Jasso | September 30, 2010 01:16 PM

That was pretty good.... Got anything scarier?

Posted by: Tj | September 30, 2010 01:24 PM

wow

Posted by: dd | September 30, 2010 07:27 PM

THAT WAS AWSOME IT WAS SO SCARY

Posted by: MAKENZIE BLAIR | October 1, 2010 10:24 AM

THAT WAS AWSOME IT WAS SO SCARY

Posted by: MAKENZIE BLAIR | October 1, 2010 11:01 AM

kool story give me more

Posted by: max | October 1, 2010 03:29 PM

kool story give me more

Posted by: max | October 1, 2010 03:30 PM

kool story give me more

Posted by: max | October 1, 2010 03:31 PM

SCARY

Posted by: Anonymous | October 1, 2010 03:59 PM

OMG THAT WAS SCARY

Posted by: Anonymous | October 1, 2010 04:29 PM

THIS SORY SCARED ME SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! HELLO NIGHTMARES!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: katie | October 2, 2010 07:49 AM

IT WAS REALLY SCAREY

Posted by: ashwathy | October 2, 2010 11:16 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Scared the C#** out of me!

Posted by: inuyasha12ist | October 2, 2010 03:01 PM

Classic - and very spooky!

Posted by: Marco | October 2, 2010 10:00 PM

that story was not very scary but bloody mary gave me goosebumps

Posted by: Anonymous | October 3, 2010 08:33 AM

that was soooo not scary!

Posted by: tara | October 3, 2010 03:21 PM

this is a great story i dont think im going to sleep tonight

Posted by: anonymos | October 3, 2010 04:01 PM

lol

Posted by: Anonymous | October 3, 2010 04:47 PM

awesome story, but not enough to terrify me

Posted by: guk | October 3, 2010 05:34 PM

wow this was freaky

Posted by: Courtney | October 3, 2010 08:39 PM

wow this was freaky

Posted by: Courtney | October 3, 2010 08:39 PM

o my stars i love scary stories!!! i cant wait to read another

Posted by: Alice | October 4, 2010 07:09 PM

that was a great story, it was pretty scary just might use that for my school assignemnt!!!!!! :)

Posted by: anonymous | October 4, 2010 07:57 PM

nice one i love it lol!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: shanzella chika | October 4, 2010 08:03 PM

Wow.... creepy. Best story I've read on this site!

Posted by: Maddi | October 5, 2010 08:06 AM

have heard another version of this when i was a kid

Posted by: fiona | October 5, 2010 12:56 PM

this is a cool story but it wasnt really that scary

Posted by: myra | October 5, 2010 06:26 PM

omg i was reading this and when i was finished i heard a BAM, BAM, BAM, like in the story, and it turns out it was just my brother comin up the stairs. GRRR! it scared the crap out of me

Posted by: chloe | October 5, 2010 06:46 PM

that was not scary

Posted by: lasair | October 5, 2010 07:50 PM

omg thats was scaryy!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 6, 2010 12:41 PM

wow it not that scary but the part of ned that was scary :(

Posted by: alejandra101 | October 6, 2010 08:21 PM

cool its getting close to halloween

Posted by: clayton | October 7, 2010 01:38 AM

OMG! I luurved it gotta c the moovE of that... make one... please? xxx

Posted by: Abi xx | October 7, 2010 01:35 PM

That was pretty scary not as scary as i thought it would be but it was ok.

Posted by: insane person | October 7, 2010 03:40 PM

This left me at the edge of my seat, I wanted to hear more. Please write a second story of this! XD

Posted by: Anonymous | October 7, 2010 06:36 PM

That was sooooooooooo scary I probaly wont beabel to sleep tonite

Posted by: sky | October 7, 2010 08:37 PM

I heard this when I was a kid about 40 years ago

Posted by: blue | October 8, 2010 08:08 AM

THAT WAS SCARY POST MORE PLZZZ

Posted by: ZANE | October 8, 2010 05:26 PM

trust me it would of have scared you but i've got a scarier story.

Posted by: ellie | October 9, 2010 01:00 AM

not that scary for me needs an ending

Posted by: Anonymous | October 9, 2010 09:32 AM

you r the best

Posted by: Anonymous | October 9, 2010 02:59 PM

i love this i want more.
this will be a story that i will never forget the porr girl's brother. What did he do to him?

Posted by: Kristen | October 9, 2010 09:23 PM

dude that was awesome!!(:

Posted by: Em | October 10, 2010 10:16 AM

Well that was romantic! :D

Posted by: Savannah Long | October 10, 2010 10:31 AM

thats so awesome but i want to know what happens to her if she got decapatated or someone saved her. i loved it though and it was kinda, sorta scary.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 10, 2010 07:31 PM

u should write of book of some sort that is even scarier and has people hanging farther off their seat!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 10, 2010 07:35 PM

this really scared me......i've go goosebumps

Posted by: crystal | October 11, 2010 05:23 AM

i got freaked out i dont even wanna drive at night-maria
i am not ganna drive at night-amanda

Posted by: amanda and maria | October 11, 2010 11:59 AM

creepy story!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 11, 2010 12:51 PM

This was avery interesting story, it gave me some great story ideas.

Posted by: alexis | October 11, 2010 03:32 PM

. . .wow. A story to scream bloody murder. But . . . will really this scare my classmates? I must say, after I read it, I actually WAS on the side of my seat. I gotta give you credit, man. Nice work.

Posted by: Raven | October 11, 2010 05:24 PM

holy crap that was super AWSOME i mean it was kinda creepy. Good story ya very good by the way is this a real story?

Posted by: maria | October 11, 2010 06:34 PM

that wus cooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllll

Posted by: Anonymous | October 12, 2010 11:45 AM

that wasn't that bad! haha

Posted by: Anonymous | October 12, 2010 07:22 PM

that us freaky! my language arts teacher told us a variation of that

Posted by: anonymous | October 12, 2010 07:39 PM

OMG as i was reading this my tv was cutting out and my lights were off, scared the crap out of me!

Posted by: Allie | October 12, 2010 08:05 PM

true story

Posted by: Anonymous | October 12, 2010 10:56 PM

wooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww is scaryyyyyyyyyyyy

Posted by: luis | October 13, 2010 09:32 AM

Wow that was lame

Posted by: Anonymous | October 13, 2010 09:34 AM

oh freak the story was amazing man loved it a lot.........!!!!!!!!:)

Posted by: Anonymous | October 13, 2010 12:09 PM

this is so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 13, 2010 01:40 PM

the storiee was alright but not that scary
:/

Posted by: LeNa | October 14, 2010 08:32 AM

wow

Posted by: Anonymous | October 14, 2010 04:17 PM

that was a scaryyyyyyy story yet I wanted to read more you should write more supper scary stories

Posted by: mily | October 14, 2010 05:42 PM

wow really scary

Posted by: lacy | October 14, 2010 08:10 PM

I've read scarier. It's really not that bad if you thinjk about all of the other ghost stories you read out there.
But still it was slightly... disturbing... :|

Posted by: Loosee | October 15, 2010 03:34 AM

Wow.That was scary but some bits in their where a bit weird....

Posted by: mollie | October 15, 2010 07:00 AM

i love it!!!its so kwl and i have to right this as a scprit for ... love it lolol

Posted by: anonymous | October 15, 2010 10:38 AM

that was cool the axe guy cus his neack that was cool

Posted by: Anonymous | October 15, 2010 01:21 PM

SCARY!!!!!I WISH THERE WAS MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: MARIE | October 15, 2010 03:29 PM

eehhh...it was ok i just think u should of made it longer not jump 2 the murder or the big good part sooo fast....cause u know its obvious whats gonna happen but it was steal really good!:)

Posted by: Sarah Gillian | October 15, 2010 04:40 PM

ok its still really good though i copied it down and used it as my scary storie whgen we roasted marshmallows

Posted by: Sarah Gillian | October 15, 2010 05:26 PM

That was okay. I heard better and it needed to be longer. The Hermit's House was a WHOLE lot better. I suppose I'm actually disappointed because a lot of Schlosser's others were so much better, like the Wraith of the Creek.

Posted by: D | October 16, 2010 06:04 PM

i knew that history, i saw it on supernatural first season: hook man....
Hi!!!
from Peru, people

Posted by: kristhel | October 16, 2010 08:49 PM

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!

Posted by: colton | October 16, 2010 09:58 PM

that was so scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 17, 2010 06:27 AM

That was not to scary but it was okay i guess.it was kindof sweet

Posted by: Anonymous | October 17, 2010 10:36 AM

it was really scary it put me on the edge of my seat

Posted by: Anonymous | October 17, 2010 03:23 PM

is that true

Posted by: jessica | October 17, 2010 03:58 PM

It was awesome!. But it needs to be longer, cus the plots in there happen so fast

Posted by: Unknown Stranger | October 18, 2010 03:01 AM

haha this was funny!!! not too scary...unless u were reading it at night :)

Posted by: classtime+comp=funnn | October 18, 2010 08:38 AM

I'm researching cool and scary ghost stories for my 8th grade class and this one is perfect.(:

Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 10:03 AM

i really like this one.... although the bump bump bump reminds me of my favorite kotton mouth kings song :P lol

Posted by: linda | October 18, 2010 11:25 AM

i want more!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 04:08 PM

OMG!!!! After i read this my mother came through the door and it freakin scared the crap outta me!!!!!!!

Posted by: Sam | October 18, 2010 05:26 PM

ooh! scary!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 05:56 PM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 18, 2010 07:01 PM

OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG
i wanted more but that was
frikin scary!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: brittney r | October 19, 2010 12:08 PM

i read the story in biology and it was an embarassement to mankind

Posted by: Nicole,Ryan,Danny | October 20, 2010 03:51 AM

WOW that was amazing! were all petrified!! stuckon our chairs unable tomove. imsure someothing slipped out

Posted by: Nicole,Ryan,Danny | October 20, 2010 03:53 AM

i want more

Posted by: dyllan | October 20, 2010 11:07 AM

The moment i read the last word, some one knocked on my door....it scared the hell out of me!!!!

Posted by: Shruti Ayare - Mumbai, India | October 20, 2010 11:30 AM

hahahahaha funny

Posted by: Anonymous | October 20, 2010 05:31 PM

Thats was scary! Im breathless!

Posted by: Makala R. | October 20, 2010 05:41 PM

i read that last halloween

Posted by: Shannen | October 21, 2010 04:54 AM

OMG so scary i was so scared i was out of my skin i felt like hidding!! grat ghost sory!!

Posted by: niamh | October 21, 2010 12:12 PM

it was not to scary but good!!

Posted by: niamh | October 21, 2010 12:14 PM

thats too scaryyy!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2010 01:24 PM

Im soooooooooo scared!!!!!!!=( =0

Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2010 03:56 PM

That sounded a little too familiar to be scary, but it was good.

Posted by: Kayriegh | October 21, 2010 04:19 PM

that was a awsome scary story man good job on that one

Posted by: garrett | October 21, 2010 07:40 PM

Good story, but it didn't really scare me much... Maybe its because I'm not in the dark while reading this?

Posted by: Anonymous | October 21, 2010 08:43 PM

scared

Posted by: Erin | October 22, 2010 07:48 AM

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG

Posted by: ROMARO | October 22, 2010 09:51 AM

I like the part were neds body is hanged by the feet and that his throat is split

Posted by: kayla dalton | October 22, 2010 09:58 AM

OMG! THIS IZ A SCARY STORY I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 22, 2010 10:05 AM

holy that was pretty intense
!!!! it was amazing!!!! why did'nt she run!!!???? LOL

Posted by: Anonymous | October 22, 2010 11:54 AM

That was really creepy, I hope I don't have bad nightmares

Posted by: Anonymous | October 22, 2010 08:36 PM

Wow that was freaky and since it's like 4:29 in the morning I guess I shouldn't uav read that! Hahahaha jst saying

Posted by: Anonymous | October 23, 2010 03:28 AM

Oh my geez this was really scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 23, 2010 01:55 PM

scaaaryy

Posted by: aymane marosli | October 23, 2010 02:17 PM

liked da story...........realy spooky.

Posted by: Dechen Pem | October 24, 2010 04:52 AM

This story was scary!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 24, 2010 08:53 AM

OMG!!!!! That was not scary at all.
I mean the only thing that was kindof scary was when she found hr husband dead. The part of the story was freaky but not scary

Posted by: Annie | October 24, 2010 10:48 AM

That as scary i read the story and then my phone rang and i fell out of my seat onto the floor and my phone rang again. Lol

Posted by: Shiloh | October 24, 2010 01:29 PM

i think its supper spooky!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 24, 2010 02:49 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ill have nite mares tonight!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 24, 2010 02:56 PM

holy crabby patties! i fell out of my seat! my uncles name is nad and he got hung! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nah just kidding

Posted by: sam | October 24, 2010 07:48 PM

OMG!!! I NEED TO KNOW MORE!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO CREEPY !!

Posted by: katrhryn | October 25, 2010 08:13 AM

holy crap

Posted by: elio | October 25, 2010 10:45 AM

holy crap thats realy scary storie

Posted by: elio | October 25, 2010 10:51 AM

its alright no that bad...ready for halloween

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 11:20 AM

this was a pretty wicked story ...

Posted by: daisy | October 25, 2010 11:23 AM

it was ok

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 11:48 AM

As I was reading this, the wind was whistling and rattling in the bacround! It creeped the crap out of me!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 12:24 PM

it wasnt scary but it was an interesting story. someting for me to do during boring class

Posted by: Chris Roach | October 25, 2010 01:22 PM

omg

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 01:53 PM

Nice Story love it people cus to much in this world lol

Posted by: Anoumous | October 25, 2010 03:02 PM

that was not scary, I want something scarier!!!!!!!

Posted by: sary story lover | October 25, 2010 05:25 PM

that was sooo scary. I am reading that story to everyone in school tomorrow

Posted by: bri bri esponol | October 25, 2010 06:11 PM

what!Ned dies AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Posted by: Anonymous | October 25, 2010 11:49 PM

i read this
it was very intresting and i really wanted there to be more!

Posted by: shauna | October 26, 2010 08:01 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was creepy :o

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 09:07 AM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 10:14 AM

scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 10:15 AM

WOW its kinda scary

Posted by: Tiffany Smith | October 26, 2010 10:57 AM

WOW its kinda scary

Posted by: Tiffany | October 26, 2010 10:57 AM

That was scary

Posted by: Tiffany | October 26, 2010 11:01 AM

that was off the chain i wanna look it up on wiki wiki fresh

Posted by: Jack | October 26, 2010 11:52 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS SCARY BUT PROBABLY
NOT REAL

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 12:18 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS SCARY BUT PROBABLY
NOT REAL

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 12:18 PM

Are you kidding me!?!?!?!?! my cousin lives in a place THEIR WOODS ARE CALLED AXE MURDER HOLLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Mysterious | October 26, 2010 01:36 PM

HolY CRAP tHAT IS FreEAKY

Posted by: SCOTT CROSS | October 26, 2010 02:01 PM

wow

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 02:08 PM

That scared me crapless

Posted by: AC | October 26, 2010 03:00 PM

I have heard scarier.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 26, 2010 03:19 PM

This story is from where I live it has a ton of different tellings and going to the sight is actually really fun!

Posted by: ERIE | October 26, 2010 04:21 PM

That was AWESOME!CRAZZZZZZYYYYY!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHH
i....need......a.....sequel!

Posted by: Ellie | October 26, 2010 05:13 PM

woow... real goodd

Posted by: anne | October 27, 2010 11:21 AM

Scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 01:18 PM

OMG THAT WAS SCARY MY FRIEND TOLD ME THAT SAME EXCACT STORY IT SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 02:44 PM

that was scary

Posted by: rahelf | October 27, 2010 02:59 PM

i died and came back to life

Posted by: nunia | October 27, 2010 03:25 PM

scary

Posted by: jenn | October 27, 2010 03:33 PM

My mom told me this story when I was little. I was sooo scared!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 04:14 PM

thats whoever made this story ya just save my homework assigment and i thought this was kind of scary but it let me thinking what happened next so im goin to have some nightmares

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 06:29 PM

great story

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 07:44 PM

good story lol

Posted by: Anonymous | October 27, 2010 07:46 PM

i died and came alive again lol =)

Posted by: nunnia | October 27, 2010 08:45 PM

This story is soooooo CREEPY but totally AWESOME it left me on the edge of my seat soooooo SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: Katheen Mhatre | October 27, 2010 09:55 PM

This was good! Really got my heart pumping!

Posted by: Haiden. (: | October 28, 2010 09:17 AM

it's just like the no tresspasing story on this site scarry tho

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 11:21 AM

WHOA! We have to tell a ghost story in reading class tomorrow and I without a doubt pick this one!! Radical!!

Posted by: Danessa | October 28, 2010 03:44 PM

OMG~!!!! that was scary!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 04:52 PM

dang that is soo scary jk jk jk

Posted by: sierra | October 28, 2010 05:43 PM

it is scary i WANT morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre

Posted by: c.a. | October 28, 2010 06:41 PM

this story wuz very good but it was not scary..........

Posted by: alayah | October 28, 2010 07:35 PM

omg!!! im a super scardy cat! thanx 4 the scare!

Posted by: kelly | October 28, 2010 07:46 PM

awsum sacry story xD

Posted by: Anonymous | October 28, 2010 11:56 PM

omg axe murder hallow is now a sub division no lie it really is still gotta love the local ghost story's =]

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 01:34 AM

that was not scary it was so boring

Posted by: shdfg | October 29, 2010 03:45 AM

Extremely short short and very very simple. Too much so.
A site called horrormasters has more adult classic fare from the victorian and edwardian age -2000 plus stories.

Posted by: margie | October 29, 2010 10:25 AM

i thought that was bl**dy amazing next sleep ova im reading that on. I hav got a clown story one but thats really old now and ive been looking for a new one and thats now the top, its gunna scare the livin cr*p out of them!!!lol!!! thnx for the gr8 story!!!!

Posted by: Catherine Fitzgerald | October 29, 2010 10:39 AM

this is not a scary storie its actually a really funny one

Posted by: michael Wheelbarger | October 29, 2010 12:07 PM

wow that stori waz crazii!!! who does that!!! i would have never got out tha car

Posted by: Terri Beard | October 29, 2010 12:09 PM

I heard scarier

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 12:56 PM

woahhhhh this story is great.... really? i think it was alright :P

Posted by: Hugh Jass | October 29, 2010 03:29 PM

crazyfide

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 05:51 PM

No ah no.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 05:58 PM

OMG

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 06:10 PM

i wanna know more

Posted by: Anonymous | October 29, 2010 06:15 PM

This is a really great story that captures thr reader as soon as they start reading. It also keeps the reader in suspence, and the ending where she noticed the glowing figure was the ghost added some real emotion. IT endend in a great way leaving the reader scared..
Love it defienetly 5/5

Posted by: Brad | October 29, 2010 11:01 PM

that's friken scary

Posted by: Matt | October 29, 2010 11:05 PM

I don't know when the story was started and when it was ended up. If you had elaborated it. It would be better then.

Posted by: Mohd Abid | October 30, 2010 08:38 AM

better then the first one!

Posted by: Jessica Amadon | October 30, 2010 11:14 AM

Me and my friends will be reading this outside in the dark tommorow as it is hallowe'en!! XX

Posted by: Lottie333 | October 30, 2010 12:25 PM

OMGGGGGGGGGGG what the HELL that was creapy iam never going out at night :(

Posted by: janine | October 30, 2010 01:01 PM

This is scary. You really scared me out of my wits!

Posted by: Holly Burden | October 30, 2010 04:32 PM

This Was Good..want more to read though..

Posted by: Anonymous | October 30, 2010 06:54 PM

nice story dude. i was thinking it wouldve been a little scarier with all the coments. if u wouldve added more then it probably wouldve been scarier and better.

Posted by: kiki | October 30, 2010 09:24 PM

Ehhhh, it was alright. Not the very best. It was still good though(:

Posted by: Trick-or-Treat(: | October 30, 2010 09:34 PM

Omg. I shivered while reading the last part. :0

Posted by: Bea Lubiano | October 31, 2010 03:36 AM

Im only 8 and i loved tht i wos wth my best pal Alexandra it wos amazin I NEED MORE.

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2010 07:16 AM

It made me laugh, It wasn't scary

Posted by: Anonymous | October 31, 2010 07:32 AM

acctually, i'm looking forward st more but nothing happens. the climax is not really attracted. however, the story still good

Posted by: chix | October 31, 2010 11:42 AM

that is freaky i cant believe that happened

Posted by: lady gaga | October 31, 2010 11:45 AM

great i loved it but u should make it longer

Posted by: jerrika walkup | October 31, 2010 12:08 PM

right when i finished reading, my mom knocked on the door. it freaked me out so much that i screamed

Posted by: Gabie | October 31, 2010 12:33 PM

nice story didnt scare me but it was really good you should rite a book i know i would by it

Posted by: Nathan.A.Davies | October 31, 2010 04:19 PM

OMG! this is good! nt scary bt ok

Posted by: livier | October 31, 2010 06:58 PM

BEAST MODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAZ AWSOME THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!!!!!!!

Posted by: jayla | November 1, 2010 09:53 AM

i bout pissed myself hahahahahahahahahahaha

Posted by: Anonymous | November 1, 2010 09:54 AM

that was amazing i wanted more

Posted by: Anonymous | November 1, 2010 01:25 PM

not scary

Posted by: sammy | November 1, 2010 05:43 PM

omg that story was so scary it was very bad that he killed his wife i wanted more scary

Posted by: lili | November 2, 2010 09:50 AM

OMG is that true???

Posted by: Anonymous | November 2, 2010 01:55 PM

that was sick but it would have been better if somone came looking and found the 2 of them haning from trees

Posted by: bloody ace | November 2, 2010 02:35 PM

it would've been better if the story had explained Susan's affair.

Posted by: miguel | November 2, 2010 04:11 PM

this was a good story!!!

Posted by: sally | November 2, 2010 08:03 PM

so spooky i got to tell my mates it'll scare the day lights out of them

Posted by: Patricia go | November 2, 2010 11:59 PM

the story was great and i thought it was creepy for a second i thought bigfott hung the guy!!!!!! LOL! OMG!**********************

Posted by: Anonymous | November 3, 2010 09:13 AM

not scary but thank you anywyas

Posted by: cinderella | November 3, 2010 11:54 AM

OMG................... soo freaky i might have night mares now :(

Posted by: Lily | November 3, 2010 08:25 PM

i had night mare

Posted by: Anonymous | November 4, 2010 05:25 AM

I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by: TDD lover | November 4, 2010 11:55 AM

it was scary and okay

Posted by: nicholha | November 4, 2010 03:18 PM

it was sad and scary

Posted by: Anonymous | November 4, 2010 03:20 PM

that was amazing.. i believe anything i read... hope i never experience that.. although it is not scary like the la llorona ;]

Posted by: AD | November 4, 2010 03:52 PM

It was amazing

Posted by: Noobhunter | November 4, 2010 04:09 PM

SCARY SCARY I AM SHAKIN!!!

Posted by: Tia | November 6, 2010 04:11 AM

wow, that was like freaking awesome!!! LOVE it...

Posted by: twijunkie | November 7, 2010 02:00 AM

cool

Posted by: Anonymous | November 7, 2010 01:43 PM

good story i guess but at the begging it was terrile

Posted by: death | November 8, 2010 04:51 PM

omg after i read this made me want to read on and on but i couldnt cuz it ended

Posted by: Jessica | November 8, 2010 06:48 PM

that scared me so bad i accidently screamed.When i screamed my cat ran and hit the wall lol

Posted by: amy | November 9, 2010 05:37 PM

that was nice, there must be more.

Posted by: kingsley | November 10, 2010 02:50 PM

so scary!

Posted by: scares rule! | November 10, 2010 04:13 PM

OMG! that story was freakin scary! it was so scary how thye man said :playing around behind my back, you've been very naughty.' it sooo freaked me out!

Posted by: Lucinda | November 10, 2010 09:56 PM

tell us more!

Posted by: natala | November 12, 2010 05:15 PM

ive heard it once

Posted by: brend | November 14, 2010 10:53 AM

that was Really Scary

Posted by: Richard | November 15, 2010 11:02 AM

im going to have nightmares tonight...

Posted by: annalisa | November 15, 2010 11:37 PM

that story was shit !

Posted by: charlotte | November 16, 2010 01:16 PM

Good story, but it didn't really scare me though.

But still it was fun to read :)

Posted by: Swiftclaws | November 20, 2010 08:44 PM

so scary is it real i am sooooooo not going there

Posted by: kate | November 21, 2010 02:10 PM

that must have been pretty gross 2 c ned dead WOWW!!!!

Posted by: mini meee | November 22, 2010 04:39 PM

wow that is one of the scaryest thing i have ever read wow...im shaking but i loved it its amazing

Posted by: kat | November 23, 2010 12:27 AM

wow that was weird

Posted by: Anonymous | November 23, 2010 03:45 PM

******AWSOME I CANT WAIT TO TELL MY FRIENDS AT MY NEXT SLEEP OVER THEY'LL LOVE IT******

Posted by: Sarah | November 24, 2010 09:47 AM

OMG that made my eyes water

Posted by: liam | November 24, 2010 12:57 PM

My heart is still going THUMP THUMP THUMP THUUMMPPPP. Really fast. Spooky,

Posted by: Anonymous | November 25, 2010 02:57 PM

that was moderatly desterping and i will never be able to unread it!!!

Posted by: Sakura | November 26, 2010 03:37 PM

OMG!!! this one is scary because my family and I go on road trips ALL the time and we stop at rest areas at night! and once we had to pull over cuz somthing was in the road and my dad got out and thought it would be funny to scare us! SOOOO not funny

Posted by: Aimee | November 26, 2010 08:00 PM

Best scary story ever!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | November 27, 2010 04:55 PM

wow that was so cool i love scary stories wohooo thats a scarey storie :)

Posted by: Alyssa | November 27, 2010 10:14 PM

this was in a movie

Posted by: hayley | November 28, 2010 12:25 PM

I think supernatural used this somehow?

Posted by: Anonymous | November 28, 2010 05:28 PM

AWESOME!!!!!!it was totally and awesomely creepy!!!!

Posted by: izzy | November 29, 2010 09:41 AM

i LOVE it !

Posted by: Anonymous | November 29, 2010 03:25 PM

OMG that story was sooo scary

Posted by: Paige | December 3, 2010 08:48 AM

omg that was scary but i wanted more

Posted by: bella | December 3, 2010 09:30 PM

something like this actually happened before i moved into my house

Posted by: toxi | December 4, 2010 12:38 PM

i couldnt get my eyes off the story it wasnt even that scary

Posted by: chi | December 4, 2010 12:57 PM

i cant belive that dude im freaking out

Posted by: sara | December 4, 2010 01:39 PM

I think that was freaky! I was about to run away from my computer! That is one scary story.

Posted by: O.K. | December 4, 2010 02:53 PM

It wasn't scary, but it was deffinetly spooky. I loved it!!

Posted by: Anonymous | December 4, 2010 04:48 PM

wow that story was awesome!!!! i love sacry stories and this one was GREAT!!!

Posted by: Jasper | December 4, 2010 05:03 PM

The curtain fell and it scared me!!! Awesome story!!

Posted by: ciara | December 4, 2010 05:19 PM

this story gonna make me sleep with my mom.

Posted by: Anonymous | December 7, 2010 05:20 PM

creeeeeeeeepy im never driving in a lightning storm AGAIN!!!

Posted by: Anonymous | December 8, 2010 08:05 PM

wow

Posted by: Anonymous | December 9, 2010 12:37 PM

That story has been going around where I live since it actually happened out at a lake ten miles from where I live when my mom was little. They call it screaming sheila's lake. Or you could use the official name...Ringling Lake....Creppy name too. Huh? Look it up. Everyone has heard it from here. You can even see her out there late at night.

Posted by: Ann Boone | December 9, 2010 02:01 PM

omg awsome

Posted by: rosa estrada | December 10, 2010 04:43 PM

Even though its closer to Christmas than Halloween, I love hearing these. My sister doesn't like to read, so Ill have to read this to her. This is

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